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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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IcyIndia
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Nomad

Calling Ravens
at their nightly post,
relaying messages
of despair.

The sound is dreaded
but it comes every night.
Worthless hope, as if any hope
has worth.

Keep the Ravens close
and they will protect you
but they will drag you down.

Keep them far
and you will not know of the pain.
You will be oblivious
and not carry the weight of their words.

Choose wisely the words
you wish to hear.
Ones of lies, or ones of dreadful truths?
Decide carefully.

Drifts, lines in the sand

deathopper
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The death of a brilliant star in the sky
A star shining so bright in the night sky
Embracing humanity with such a bright light
Unaware that her admires are down below while she is high.
Continue to shine with such beauty despite the height.

As she grew old her shine grew dim
Her fame across the land faded
And her admires had a change of whim
Her great gleam was no more celebrated.

Her age grew higher and higher
Meeting up with her height in space
Her youth never to be regained, the only thing desired
She had lost her excellence, her great grace.

Her death had finally arrived, but no mourn could be heard.
As a once great star now forgotten has wept too much, she has no last word.

Is it ok if I change the title a bit? To make it singular instead of plural?

Next line: I knew I had to face a great battle.

Holladay15
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Nomad

I knew I had to face a great battle.
I sharpened my blade
and prepared my bow
as I watched my children with the cattle
Although I prayed
and see the sun glow
I knew I had to face a great battle

Holladay15
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Nomad

The streets

thecattygrl
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230 posts
Nomad

The streets
Seem dark and cold
Yet are lit by soals


So bright and bold

dudeguy45
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Peasant

So bright and bold
these things never get old
dazzeling in the light
it gives me much delight


That day of the month

Ryhme...

aknerd
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Peasant

That day of the month
when we all line up
Everyone-even the mayor
Be it a sunny day
or hurricane
At the top of the mountain

That day of the Month
When the last in line
of that line so long
So many familiar faces
All but one smiling

That day of the month
When that poor poor
man, woman, or child
Walks from the end
To the cliff
falls

So many months,
So many days.

One question too many

waluigi
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Shepherd

One question too many
it seems that I've blown
my shot at true love
with one question too many

Oh, how seemed so perfect
but I just had to go
and ask that one question
and now I'm alone, yet again

Perhaps another drink will help
ease the pain of my heartache
so many girls lost, with that
one question too many

Inside the sad cafe

IcyIndia
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1,344 posts
Nomad

Inside the sad cafe
blues music drips down the walls
and time is stuck.
People sip their coffee endlessly,
pondering the meaning of life
and whether their toaster needs to be fixed.

Inside the sad cafe
things are slow, smooth, calm.
Nothing is rushed.
Smooth jazz is played, slow
as that man's heartbeat.
Nothing is hectic.
And slowly, everything melts.
This is the way life is.

Don't forget the dead leaves in winter

Paarfam
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Don't forget the dead leaves in winter
They must be raked and burned
Burned like a rich man's vision
Scorched like his soul

Strength is...

MoonFairy
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3,386 posts
Shepherd

Strength is...
Found everywhere.
Maybe not the way you want it
But it is there.
You can lift a thousand pounds,
But can you mend a broken heart?
You can run a hundred miles.
But can your heart be ripped apart?

Gold like the sun, green like the leaves.

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

My attempt at iambic pentameter.

Gold like the midnight sun, green like the leaves
The warmth, the hearth resonates in my mind
Those memories I keep that light up my night
Thoughts of the sun when the winters do blight
Like kindling through winter's iciest storms
Locked in my safe hidden deep beneath Earth
That I do save for when I cannot stand
When my legs shake beneath and I freeze 'lone
I'll take my memories and hold them close
And then the cold will stay in here no more
The frigid will melt away from my door
And I shall sit near the gold and the green
Stowing memories for 'nother cold eve.

Through the silvery lake

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

Past the wooden gate
behind the garden green
There is a kingdom lost,
rarely ever seen.
Maybe if you look enough
You'll catch a sight of gold
But who knows? For I sure don't
I tell only what I'm told.

How graceful is the swan

sodangobsessed
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Blackbird, sing to me
as I lay under my little apple tree.
I'll listen to you voice all day,
and all night.
If my mother calls me for dinner,
I will stay outside.

Blackbird, sing to me,
and I'll sing back to you.

Next line:
I wish I could see.

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

I wish I could see
All the dawns
All the dusks.
I wish I could see
The choking
red rust.
But as long
I'm afraid
To open my eyes,
I'll never
Be able to
Reach for the skies
For how can you
reach
If you can't see?
How can you
ever
Never be free?
I'm bound by
My fears,
Right to the ground,
Soon I'll cover
My ears,
Too afraid to hear sound.
Then I'll be nothing
I can't smile
Can't heal.
Soon it'll be over
I already
Can't feel.

There are no words

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