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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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Maverick4
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Peasant

Haiku

Glinting in the sun
Light, irridescent rays shine
Bounce off the perfect fruit.

Next Line: My hands are tied.

MoonFairy
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Shepherd

My hands are tied
We can't escape.
We don't have much longer
Before it's too late.
We came to win,
But this was just bait.
More often than not,
You can't outrun fate.
We had a mission,
But we can't negate.
We were stupid,
We didn't wait.

Those eyes,

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

Those eyes,
those gigantic eyes
captivate me
draw me in
to stare

Those eyes
those...familiar eyes?
no, that couldn't be
but those eyes,
remind me of some
one close.
who could you be?

hope I don't get caught

MoonFairy
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MoonFairy
3,386 posts
Shepherd

Hope I don't get caught,
I'm not supposed to be here.
It's 3 AM and I'm still up,
My parents, I do fear.

My bedtime was 10,
And I'm still awake.
If they find me not sleeping,
In my shoes I will quake.

So I think
It is time
To click the red X
And get offline.
_____

Slight humour 8D

[bold]The water has calmed[/bold]

Maverick4
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Peasant

My last Haiku was fail. D:

Nice BB Coding Moon. :P

Haiku
The water is calm.
Plunk! Serenity disturbed
By a restless frog.

Next Line: In the air

iMogwai
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iMogwai
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Peasant

In the air,
A nasty smell,
It's everywhere,
It's worse than hell.

From the room my dog departed,
With his head hung in shame,
I realize someone has farted,
And that my dog is to blame.


Doggy farts. Yuck.
Fart jokes. Yay.

Next line: I regret nothing

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

I regret nothing
Take me to the chopping block
I'll raise my head high

Strap me to the chair
Send volts arcing through my bones
Turn me into dust.

My eyes'll be open
Until my heart stops beating
I have done no wrong.

The key to paradise

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

raise the dark curtain
from over the land
for it has no control
anymore

for there comes
a saviour of light
to raise the curtain
and open their eyes

are you...eating cereal?

slayguy8
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slayguy8
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Peasant

Are you... eating cereal?
Are you for real?
It is 9 at night,
eating cereal is a fright!

I could see chips,
but seeing cereal pressed on your lips!
Its late,
your going to gain some weight!



The ice is inside me,
[i]

MoonFairy
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MoonFairy
3,386 posts
Shepherd

The ice is inside me
I can't get it out
No matter how loud
I try and shout.

Slowly freezing my blood,
Crawling through my veins.
No matter what I do,
The ice will remain.

It's a curse,
From the queen.
Because my gifts,
Were obscene.
I wasn't trying,
To be mean.
How was I to know,
That she allergic, to green?
_____

And failure! woohoo!

Green light flashing

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

green light flashing
OH GOD! what could it be?!
An alien ship taking captives
beaconing in with light?
or perhaps some secret
government project, designed
to control us all?!

Panic comes over me from
that flashing green light
I barricade the door with tables
and anything in sight,
take cover behind the couch.

Bravely I look to see what
this monstrous light could be,
I see a small machine, emitting
light in pulses.
I realize then...
I left my strobe light on outside.

frozen heat

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

This pill in my hand
this device for suicide
is calling to me, "take it".

"What do I have to live for?
Really?" It seems to say,
"why live another moment?"

But some new found strength
from inside emerges,
that pill goes down the drain.

"Life will go on, it'll get better"
I think to myself, but briefly.
"Some new hope'll carry me through"

falling like a block of lead

slayguy8
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718 posts
Peasant

Falling like a block of lead,
Wooziness inside my head.
Why did I jump?
My throat gets a lump.

Nearing the waving ocean,
Suicide with extreme devotion.
Same reoccurring theme,
Waking up from a terrored dream.

The death bed

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

The death bed
awaits me as
disease destroys
my body.

Immune system
failing, all organs
soon to follow
as illness wrecks
havoc inside me.

Prepare me my
death bed, for my
life soon to end
from a wretched
plague.

The porpoise is laughing

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

The porpoise is laughing
Right in front of me;
He knows I am lacking
Knowledge of the sea.

As my boat goes bounding
Over the ocean waves,
I then got to wondering
If this trip was brave.

Without a map or compass
I wander the ocean blue,
Seeking shelter or solace
From a love so true

Yet I know this cannot be
For such thoughts are in vein,
I will always wander the sea
And shant see my love again


I walked into a bar

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