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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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waluigi
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The flower died;
its years of beauty
finally fade away
as its color drains.
Years of squandered
time now reach
their end.
The red rose of beauty,
now the white rose of death.

A gathering of angels

StormWalker
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a gathering of angels
hover in the sky
inspiring awe and a litte fear
to all that pass them by
and wondering
just wondering
if their world's a lie

looking at the ground
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sorry that thats so cheesy

StormWalker
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the trees and their colorful fireworks
high and throwing sparks
of cool not hot not burning bright
but red and yellow all the same

tumble down from the sky
little pieces of fire fly
then the night steals the sun
painting the world in shades of black

dancing fire flames are high
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...more cheesiness

EmperorPalpatine
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Sent by the royal king,
These messages I bring,
Words of failure and shame,
To me don't shift the blame.

I am a sailor on the sea

JimmyDimples
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I am a sailor on the sea
On a cruise ship for Sicily
Ladies in swimwear all see me
Bathrooms are full, I gotta pee.

Next:
Ukelele or tomahawk

EmperorPalpatine
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Ukelele or tomahawk
Whichever I throw, the people will gawk.
I toss them both into the air,
While my target stops to stare.

*Twang* *chonk* they hit his head,
He falls to the ground, not quite dead.
I shout out with such elation
"Oh I'm sorry, did I break your concentration?"

I am a traveling man

cablecar1
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Nomad

Noble mountains
Stand in the distance,
And the trickling fountains
Bring noisy relief,
To the the deathly silence
Of the steady snow,
As the homeless man
Stands outside the estate,
Of a rich man he does not not know.

The steady light tap

dair5
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Shepherd

The steady light tap
Of rain on my windowpane,
Reminds me I'm insane.
As I sit on the edge of my mind,
I can't help remembering I need to find
myself. I think again after my nap.

Burning a hole

cablecar1
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Burning a hole
In my morality,
The culture of the world
Lacks thought and originality.

Whether music or art
Literature or science,
The world's culture corrodes
Overpowering my conscience.

The popularity pageant
And pre-written way of thinking,
The falseness surrounding me
Reminds me I myself am sinking.

Slowly and surely
As the world blocks out the sun,
I know in the back of mind
I surely haven't won.

The broken glass falls

JimmyDimples
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The broken glass falls
Just cut up my raft.
Who thought up this trip
Was really quite daft.

Shards stacked in a pile
Threat'ning to slaughter
Next holiday I'll
Stick with whitewater.

***

Ouch! It's coming out sideways...

cablecar1
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Ouch! It's coming out sideways,
The horse rider exclaimed,
His small, bronze room key
Sticking into his leg.

He readjusted it in his pocket,
And rode on,
Slowly but surely,
Through the smog
Of the forest.

Off in the distance,
A coyote looked up at him
And with an emotionless glare,
Stepped off of the road,
Into the forest.

****ed vermin,
He said to himself,
For his lonely trips
Through the forest,
Brought back memories
Of his wife.

Anger streaked through his veins.
She had loved
This forest
More than anything else,
But her innocent
Sense of calmness
And safety
Betrayed her.

He said
His wife's spirit
Was forever left to roam
Through the forest
She had loved so much,
But he knew this
To be a lie,
Created by his imagination
For whatever reason
Or another.

The forest met
No need
In the afterlife.

The trees
Were not the Dryads
Of old fables,
Nor the animals
The carriers
Of the lost souls.

They were all
Just a reminder
Of his failure,
****ing him
To everlasting
Internal torture.

Slowly and surely,
He came upon
The cobblestone bridge,
And looked over the side.
The coursing river
Brought a wave of sadness
Upon him.

Death is only
But a step away.
Why make it wait?

He asked his horse.

His horse's liquid eyes
Gave to him no answer.
It merely picked at
The weeds in the cracks.

If I were to disappear
From this life,
You would never
Even notice my leave.


Your life has
No more meaning
Than mine does
I suppose.


His horse trotted
To the opposite side
Of the river
To begin eating daisies.

The man sat down
On the peak
Of the bridges arch,
And thought to himself,
Quietly waiting
For the end.

The end of what
He did not know.

Whether the end
Of his suffering
Through his death,
Or perhaps even
A miraculous change
In his life's course,
Either seemed a fine way
To end the failure
That was his story,
And so
He waited.

cablecar1
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Next first line:
Was that really asterisk worthy?

StormWalker
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was that asterisk really worthy
of being shaped of a star
some know it
some don't
but the asterisk
most defintely (yes i spelled that wrong most likely)
is not hydrogen filled

elephants are made of elements
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cablecar1
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Elephants are made of elements
This beginning has no sense,
Poems should not be written
About elephants,
But about a turtle fence.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qizNQKzatXA

A loud crash radiated throughout the room

JimmyDimples
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A loud crash radiated throughout the room.
Janitor knocked stuff all over with a broom
Screaming while he ran around with frantic zoom.
Hornet nest plus cherry bomb equals swift doom.

Roseanne Barr in spandex

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