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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

Ah, First Line Poetry Thread. It's been too long.

My camera is broken,
Cracks splintering the glass.
Though this moment is perfect,
I can't make it last forever.
And the broken pieces
Make it harder to see.
I wish I could save this scene,
But now I can only wait
Until your face fades from my memory,
And I find myself wishing
That I could still see you smile.

Too many sleepless nights

EmperorPalpatine
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Ever treading through the wastelands,
Hills of cold unforgiving sands:
They scorn my feet wherever I go,
But this is the only life I know.

The days are scorching and painful;
The nights are always disdainful;
But I continue my restless quest,
And traverse yet another crest.

As I cross the dune once more,
I find my home burned to the floor;
There's no reason to go on,
For all of my hopes have gone.

Because it has been six days, I am going to do a different poem. Also because I don't like the first line I've been given (sorry, StormWalker) :b

That seems a bit of an injustice. I'll give one for his too:

We jump back in our sailing ship,
Our vessel will sail as quick as a whip;
Over the waves we'll seem to soar,
For sailing the seas is never a bore!

Our journey will be quite chancy,
But join our quest if it's gold you fancy;
Treasure awaits: it's piled high,
So get on the boat, for the time is neigh!

Forever we follow the breeze,
So prepare yourself for life on the seas;
Though we always search for coinage,
The finest of treasures is the voyage!

Empty reminders of the past
MostlyToastly
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Nomad

Empty reminders of the past
Still etched within your bones
And even though the die is cast
It is not writ in stone

If you went back in time today
Would you keep life the same?
Or give yourself another way
To play your lifetime game?

If you turned back the clock on life
Equipped with what you know
Would you replace the fear and strife
With something new to show?

I think that if I had the shot
To go far back in time
I would stay here, and I would not
For this life, it is mine.

What will you dream tonight?

EmperorPalpatine
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What will you dream tonight?
Will it be pleasant and free?
Will it give you a fright,
Or will it fill you with glee?

Will you be frivolous?
Will your deepest fears be found?
Will you be limitless,
Or restricted to the ground?

Will you end your strife?
Will you start a new chapter?
Will you restart your life?
What dream are you after?

EmperorPalpatine
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Whoops forgot to add the next line:

Life is an endless path

IcyIndia
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Nomad

Life is an endless path,
Barren and frightful.
Full of eyes hiding
in a forest of memories.

Barren and frightful,
This place is not what was before.
It used to be beautiful,
But now it is a skeleton.

Full of eyes hiding,
Watching and waiting
For the right moment to strike,
They are racing alongside the path.

In a forest of memories
I walk alone, shutting my eyes tight
Blocking out the sounds the leaves make
and the whispers from those thorns of spite.

So tired

knight_34
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Farmer

So tired I can barely keep,
my poor eyes away from sleep.
Behind me the monster creeps;
a pervert waiting for a peep.

It lurks beneath my bed I swear!
Waiting for my brain to snare!
And when I do go to sleep,
there won't be time to say my prayers.

But I have no goods to show,
'cept for my figure of dough
What to this monster do I owe?
A mystery I wouldn't know.

So tired that I might as well,
give up my fears, to be quelled.
For I shouldn't give a hell.
fear, my thoughts, will never compel.

My head hurts and my muscles ache.
If there's a monster, its jaw I'll break.
It'll realise it's cruel mistake!
I'll chop it up and make a steak!

My brain is a milkshake.

kingryan
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Farmer

My brain is a milkshake.
Would you like a sip?
Not entirely sure what flavour,
I guess it is a lucky dip.

I filled it with stuff,
Like knowledge and girls.
Mixed in some icecream,
Doesn't that make you hurl?

I whipped in the milk,
And added the books.
Included some homework,
And that girl with the looks.

I jumped up and down,
And shook my head to and fro.
I bashed it against walls-
Heh, recorded THAT in slow-mo-

And then it was done,
This milkshakey mess.
But it is my mind,
Isn't it just the best.

If all of time were in a cup...

MostlyToastly
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If all of time were in a cup
I think that I would drink it up
And then once I had drunk my fill
I think that my guts, I would spill
And every time that I hiccup
The future will just not stand still!

Once upon a time ago...

EmperorPalpatine
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Once upon a time ago,
This river would ebb and flow,
But there was a change in the tide,
And the river became dried,
So now the lilies won't grow.


Hatred is a plague

IcyIndia
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Hatred is a plague,
Infecting everyone
save those with tolerance.
Hatred is a storm,
Striking everyone in its path.
Hatred is a shadow,
Stopped by nothing and
Taken into the hearts of the willing.

A shadow that seeps into every corner,
Steals into every peaceful mind.
It creates fire in its path,
reckless and unstoppable.
It is thoughtless.
It consumes everything.
And nobody will rise
from the ashes.

IcyIndia
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Sorry, forgot the next line. Here it is.

Hot chocolate

EmperorPalpatine
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Hot chocolate:
The beverage of
The Aztec gods
That pleases all.

Bold and creamy;
Flavored delight,
Transfix me with
Your refined taste.

Fear is a mountain

StormWalker
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fear is a mountain
poking high out into the cold
sad and alone
and feeling it's own fear

the fear that is there
defines the world
with a roughened edge here
and a smoothed out one there
and the world gets a touched up paint job

like an old rusty car
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sorry that made no sense :P

EmperorPalpatine
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Like an old rusty car,
The aged paint is chipping,
The polish is no more;
Age is unforgiving.

A forgotten soul,
Now a hollow shell;
Stuck on cruise control,
Going straight to hell.

Welcome to the real world.

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