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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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StormWalker
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Fireworks, lighting up the sky
tearing it, rending it, clawing and burning it
gashing a hole open
wide open
wide
the hole takes the sky by surprise
eats the stars the moon the sun even
and guess whats on the other side
of the cast-away sky?
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fluffy neon teddy bears! hug them before they fry your head!

EmperorPalpatine
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Fluffy neon teddy bears!
Hug them before they fry your head!
Just be cautious and beware:
Their goal is to make you dead!

If they find you all alone,
Run as fast as you can!
Or else they'll turn you into stone,
And throw you into a van!

They'll dump you in the sea,
Where you'll slowly erode away.
So give them what they need,
And they'll leave for the day.

My shoe smells like a lime.

cablecar1
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Nomad

My shoe
Smells like a lime
,
I observed as I knelt
To pick up a dime.
The value I felt,
Of this observation,
Was lesser than zilch,
As I glanced at the time.

The bus pulled up
And reminded me quickly
Of my advanced hunger;
I was feeling quite sickly.
The banner, like thunder,
Rang out in my stomach -
A half-pound sandwich,
It proclaimed, quite slickly.

GIMME A BLOODY SANDWICH,
At the lunch lady,I yelled loudly.
Who pulled out a metal tray
And swung it profoundly.
SON OF A BEAVER,
She screamed, kicking my ***,
And I left the cafeteria,
With my stolen sandwich, proudly.

The mailman stared at me

acmed
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Nomad

The mailman stared at me,
As I looked out the window.
But the thing is, my pants were dropped.
So I picked up the phone and called the cops.

I hear a whisper all alone.

dair5
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Shepherd

I heard a whisper all alone.
I saw ghost all by myself.
I felt a shadow in the dark.
And thats when I relized,
that these senses had come alive.
The whisper had made my ears bleed.
The ghost had pushed my eyes back into my head.
And the shadow had strangled me into a sleep.
When I had awoken these demons were gone.
Cowards to afriad to meet me in day.
Until night, where I would die again.

A strong look is all it takes.

acmed
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Nomad

A strong look is all it takes,
To make me feel alive.
For all that lives up to the beauty,
The beauty that I thrive.

A shadow flies upon the moon

crazyrussian97
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Shepherd

A shadow flies upon the moon
To veil the radiant beauty's face,
For men like me are prone to swoon,
And lose themselves in lust's embrace.

The guide to those who walk the night,
A friend to those who roam alone.
Her cold and enigmatic light
Appeals to hearts of secret stone.

The evanescent queen of tides;
She waxes strong, then fades away.
At times the sun will make her hide;
At times she braves the light of day.

The moon, now covered by a storm,
Relinquishes her lofty throne.
Like those whose hearts are never warm
She stays aloof, alert, alone.

Here is where I make my stand

StormWalker
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Here is where i make my stand
a fist of land went punching out
into the desolate sea
the army before me
the air behind me

and i decided to be a bird
the last time
before dying on the ghostly sea
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i went SPLAT and it was too green

EmperorPalpatine
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I went splat and it was too green
As I landed upon the scene;
The color seemed to fade
Into a darker shade;
Then the sky began to glow
And the truth began to show;
Everything had a brighter tint,
Then I died on the pavement.

I was waiting for a train

cablecar1
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Nomad

I was waiting for a train,
I said to myself, "No pain, no gain,"
And as the train came to a halt,
I lunged, I jumped, I made a vault.

Across the tracks I tumbled lightly,
The trains spotlight, shimmered brightly,
And as I saw the figure that was myself crumble,
I heard the groan of Death's hollow rumble.

And surely as my spirit descended,
I felt a tug as my body was mended,
And as the paramedic brought life to my spirit's vessel,
I saw God's hand reach out, and with him I wrestled.

"Let me go," I said, hatred in my eyes,
"I Am who I Am," Who Am I, that you should despise.
I crafted your body in your mother's whom,
And now I raise your life from Death's tomb.

I was there when the universe was created,
You were not alone as you wandered,
You were not allowed to die when it was not your time,
Even now, I shall not leave your side.
Your desperation for a different life...
Did I not create you,
With every detail of your life in mind?
Who are you that should decide what your life should be?
But even as I let you go your way,
I was the one who decided your path,
And even now as you attempt to leave my path again,
You shall not leave what I have made for you,
For I Am who I Am.
You shall not be what you want to be,
For your flesh merely deterred you,
From who you were meant to be.
I have made you a vessel,
To show the world,
That I Am who I Am.

Awestruck, I breathed another breath,
My empty life was no longer Death,
And Death became no more a part of me.
That very day, I became Free.

A silent whisper,

EmperorPalpatine
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[holy crap that was epic!]

A silent whisper,
A stifled scream,
Without wonder,
Deprived of dreams.

On a day of bitter cold,
I escaped their stranglehold;
I broke free, for I was bold,
To tell the world of things untold.

Rise up! you dreamers and thinkers;
We must make a stand!
For the age of ripeness withers,
And the mind needs to expand!

Yet my words fell on deaf ears;
My advice would not suffice,
For the people lived in fear,
And did not live their lives.

I decided to take a sip

crazyape
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Peasant

I decided to take a sip
Of my large b52
After a streak of pistol whip
Then, I got back on my feet to kill anew

I danced with Death for hours
I laid waste to lives
I emptied refugees' bowers
I widdowed mens' wives'

I cause wastage
I am the root of loss
There's no point resisting my ownage
'Cause I'm like a boss

In the treetops

StormWalker
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in the treetops
squirrels leap and bound
eating their acorns
cracking them open

does it count
to say that
squirrels are mice
with funny tails?
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i guess the answer is

bunionboy
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Peasant

im confused about what this forum is...

StormWalker
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you take what the person before you wrote under that line or in bold or italics or whatever and put it into the first part of a poem you write.
and here you had me all excited becuase i thought a person had actually posted a poem on the same day i did

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