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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

This thread used to be crazy active. Below: Not my best work.

I guess the answer is...
How you ask "Why do you love me?"
And how you know when to stop talking
And let your actions speak louder than words.
Maybe its how you make funny faces
And wipe away my tears.
It could even be how inspired you look
On the podium, eyes shining with triumph.

I guess the answer is
When the flowers bloom after the rain,
When I stand up and realize
How very big the world is,
And when the masses of people
Look up to me and ask
"What do you live for?"

But mostly, I suppose,
The answer depends on the question.

When the rain falls

StormWalker
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Jester

when the rain falls
clouds break but not me!
water falling out of the sky
too bad for you prissy people
i like getting wet
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everything gets wet.
(yes, revel in my shortness of this thingy.)

Alexistigerspice
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Farmer

Everything gets wet;
I hide beneath his arms
Kept warm by his embrace.
He is my sheild against the rain,
Protecting me from cold drops
That cling to his eyelashes.
They shine like diamonds,
And I see them more clearly
As he leans in for a kiss.
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As time slows and then stops

crazyape
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Peasant

As time slows and then stops
I see lights flashing through the night
It seems my death attracted the cops
My killer screaming with delight

Through the darkness so I see
My cold, dead eyes staring back at me
I laugh, so sickly entertained
Maybe my record will never be stained

So here I end
Set a trend
Murder my dead corpse over again

Darkness Shadow

gamer1111111
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Farmer

Darkness shadowed my waking dream
As I slowly woke out of the daze
And now and then I tried to deem
What that thing was, it seemed so crazed

Now I had woke out of the dream
Out of the land of shadows
Into into my living nightmare life
And now to face the psychos

After the battles of the day
Back I went to the shadow's land
And closing my eyes for the gruesome display
I witnessed a bloody, severed hand

But it was not the crazed creature that I so feared
For I saw that it's hand had been sliced
And then I realized that the true shadows are not in dreams:
But in life.

Alexistigerspice
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Farmer

No line for the next person? okay...

gamer1111111
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Farmer

Sorry about that, here:Walking in the valley of light

Alexistigerspice
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Farmer

Walking in the Valley of Light
Which the stars have yet to see
The sun shines with godly might
And the land glows beautifully.

However, there is no repreive
From these constant beating rays
One cannot possibly conceive
Life with no nights; only days.
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Typical of myself, but not to others

StormWalker
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Jester

typical of myself but not to others
how things run through the world
haven't you ever thought about behind the scenes
and the people that work trhere?
the world is a stage for people
so if you have stage fright,
go climb a tree
and throw coconut monkey's at people.
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what if they get a concussion, you say

Alexistigerspice
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Farmer

What if they get a concussion, you say?
Then they must stay away from sports for 14 days
The damage was done and if done again,
You might end up a vegetable, my friend.
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What is love

StormWalker
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what is love if not a bird?
all things written say love is flighty
so why shouldn't it be a bird?
i say it shouldn't be so, because
love has no feathers
and it doesn't eat worms.
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in some cases it does

jezz
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Farmer

In some cases it does,
Have a rage such as his,
But in no way I see,
Such a beast in me.

Rage has no bounds

nichodemus
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Grand Duke

Rage has no bounds,
When the Devil chisels my heart,
Eating away without a sound,
Friend or foe I can't tell apart.


I've been missing you.

JEZZ! *Smashes Keyboard*

jezz
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Farmer

I've been missing you,
Like a limb or a part,
Of a whole. In my chest,
Where we all keep a heart.

I've been missing him,
Like a hole in the head,
But I've yet to decide,
If I want him instead.

She received a rose red

I've told you stop calling me that!

nichodemus
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Grand Duke

She received a red rose,
Stained with his blood,
Still not a chapter close,
When his confusion is a flood.

Speak my true name.

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