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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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jezz
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jezz
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Farmer

Speak my true name,
Read it from Luci's list.
Only then can I say,
''Hallo welt, mein name ist..''

Didn't know my name?
Oh yes, I exist.
Hell, it lives through me,
''Hallo welt, mein name ist..''

She is the brightest beauty of all

nichodemus
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Grand Duke

She is the brightest beauty of all,
And he of all would know best,
When she innocently caused his fall,
And he now flounders in the mess.

Confusion rankles my heart.

jezz
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jezz
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Farmer

Confusion rankles my heart,
Fingers grown so white,
Yet knuckles squeezed red,
Holding, bruisingly tight.

The art of their protection,
In my eyes, in all directions,
Criticising the blackest skies,
Mesmerised by their reflections.

Soft, softly, softer still

Gosh that was hard :/

nichodemus
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nichodemus
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Grand Duke

Soft, softly, softer still,
Whisper sweet nothings in my ear,
A voice like fleeting chill,
Just that little promise dear?


Tiptoe down the dusty memory lane.

aknerd
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aknerd
1,416 posts
Peasant

Tiptoe down the dusty memory lane
And I wonder:
Why must I tread so quietly
Why do I fear awakening my own memories

They probably don't remember me
I'm a stranger to my past
Never knowing the me of tomorrow

But these old friends and enemies
behind doors-
I don't even know if they are locked
I can't even bring myself to knock
I just walk down the street, leaving

Foot prints in dust.

My life is like a simile

Parsat
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2,180 posts
Blacksmith

My life is like a simile:
As random as a bumblebee.

I heard the bells on Christmas Day

TackyCrazyTNT
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1,936 posts
Peasant

I heard the bells on Christmas Day,
Singing with their solemn voices,
As I lay in my toasty bed,
Thinking of the past year's choices.

The bells' song brought to my mind,
All I'd wished for as a child,
When everything was possible,
My imagination running wild.

I promise

MoonFairy
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Shepherd

"I promise."
"I'll be by your side."
And I believed you.
I didn't think you lied.

Until I realized,
This is just a game.
I cared and you didn't,
What a shame.

I gave you my heart,
I thought I had yours too.
But when I went out with my friends,
I saw her. With you.

You told me you were at home.
You weren't going out tonight.
We won't make a scene here,
We'll go home to fight.

You said you were
By my side, hmm?
Well not only mine,
But a few others, too.

Now I left,
I ran out the door.
Hopped into my car,
Down the road I tore.

Maybe I should't be
Going 100 down the highway.
But that doesn't matter.
I just have to get away.

____

Yeah I had to end it early, but whatever.

MoonFairy
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Shepherd

Haha

cablecar1
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Nomad

Haha! he shouted,
As he threw his knife,
That was for my papa
And this is for my wife!


And so as he yelled,
Firing his gun
The enemy flag was felled
And the battle was won!

DANG IT. TOO MUCH BATTLEFIELD 3.
Off the battlefield!

aknerd
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aknerd
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Peasant

Off the battlefield!
Return home to dead houseplants
No one watered you...?

Stop it! Just stop it already!

Alexistigerspice
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Alexistigerspice
1,502 posts
Farmer

Stop it! Just stop it already!
I'm tired of the lax and arbitrary!
Get off your butt and shut your lips
And don't eat all the onion dip >


I do not like pie

StormWalker
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Jester

i do not like pie
the kind of soft brown pie
the people who eat it
are known to die
so never ever eat the cow pie
____________________
soft and squishy avacados

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

Sing this in your head (or really loudly) to a really sad tune.

"Soft and squishy avocados"
The solitary first line said.
Lines like this, I must admit,
Are not why I come to this thread.

I clicked on these three words,
Eager to write some art,
Imagine my heavy disappointment,
When all I found was this sad start.

The sadness weighs on my heart,
And I can't contain my dismay,
As I hope for better lines,
Perhaps sometime later today.

Wishing for better days

aamer13
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Nomad

Wishing For Better Days 6 syallbles
usually on rainy nights 7 syallbles
Why cant the Days Become better. 8 syallbles

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