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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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crazyape
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I nkow that w=one

*I know that one

Sorry for the double post x]
nomoreheroes23
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Death on the wind.
What does it mean,really?
And why is the tought of it so eerie?
Do you fly away now,
or you get caught?


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Your eyes pierce my soul

xShiftedHD
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Your eyes pierce my soul
Staring me down
Scarring me irreparably
Ruining my life down...

Idk, sounds like a poem :P

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The stairway of life

kevin8ye
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The stairway of life
starts from the joy
of being born.

You walk up the beginning,
and become a toddler
Then comes the part
of a child
next, comes the teen
after, the adult
then the grand(etc.)
and finally, at the top
you reach the final stage;

death

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ZOMBIE!!!!!!!

EnterOrion
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Zombie, oh lord of death,
Breathing your rancid breath,
You bide your time in hope of prey,
Until the night ends, the dawn of day.

Zombie, oh lord of pain,
The blood flowing in pouring rain,
You bide your time in hope of life,
Until your torment ends, at the tip of my knife.

Zombie, oh lord of blood,
Your body rotting in the soupy mud,
You bide your time in hope of fun,
Until your torment ends, from the flash of a gun.

Wicked demon, oh lord of the undead,
You will die like the other monsters,
And my task will be completed.

Fires burn into the midday sun

nomoreheroes23
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Fires burn into the midday sun,
The ground glows in the unbearable heat
Under the shade shall we meet?


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The heart is a strange thing

murasaki9
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The heart is a strange thing
first it loves, now it hates
it will waver and it will stand

the heart happiness will bring
but bitterness it will make
there is no heart, there is no brand

Free verse.

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As the sun ran the horizon

nomoreheroes23
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As the sun ran the horizon
The clouds went away
Mountain shows it`s glory
A monk starts to pray.

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Bask at my knowledge

kevin8ye
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Bask at my knowledge
and bow down to me,
for I, the almighty is far more superior than you.

Be in awe at my vast sea of knowledge
and now, become my slave.
for I, am far more superior than you.

Do all my bidding, you insignificant slave
chop all the wood,
and keep hacking away.

Murder my enemies
as they sleep,
and destroy those
who all threaten me.

And remember my servant,
that you must bask at my knowledge
and bow down to me,
for I, the almighty is far more superior than you. (LONGEST POEM I'VE TYPED)

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The longest poem I typed

nomoreheroes23
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The longest poem I typed,
Why did I even bring this up?
Oh well....
(It`s......sort of a.....poem?)

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Oh sweet January

light_chaser
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Oh sweet January,
I would go to an estuary,
if it weren't so cold.

Oh sweet January,
it is the familiarity,
that is killing me.

Oh sweet January,
is the time for trollfaceiarity,
it is troll.
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that was weird

acmed
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That was weird,
When you knocked on my door.
Me and you are through,
I don't want you anymore.

I would run away,
Just to hear your quiet.
If you call me again,
I'll start you a riot.

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The sunshine peeks up

crazyape
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The sunshine peeks up
Boldly through the clouds
I draw my blade
And rush through the crowds

I've got one mission
And one alone
To stop your fishin'
Before your hook is blown
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Pawny pumpwagon

kevin8ye
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Pawny pumpwagon,
what is it?
I dont know,
do you?

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Creepy stalkers eveywhere

Maverick4
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Creepy stalkers everywhere,
And not a place to hide.
Creepy stalkers everywhere,
And not a tear is cried.

Off in the East

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