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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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EnterOrion
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Off in the East, the sound of the beast,
Calling through the midnight air;
Sixteen fortnights and a battle fair,
No war was lost to the West.

The sound of the drums, and marching man's hums,
Fighting the weary feet;
The soldiers come through the valley of pain,
An ambush laid as they weep.

In sixteen fortnights not a soul was lost,
But there in the forlorn plains,
Twelve thousand will die,
To rise to the final plane.

Off in the East, no soldier was found,
Our lord called them home;
The march was endless, the battle relentless,
The snow to become their tomb.

Our gods have left us for more worthy men,
But we drag on in bitter frost;
To be with our wives, no matter the cost,
We will return home from the East.

EnterOrion
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Nomad

Whoops

General Winter, the lord of frost,

kevin8ye
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Nomad

General Winter, the lord of frost
is obviously a fake.
that's what they thought,
until one day,
killed a guy named Blake.

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Walkety, Walk Walk, Stalkety, Stalk, Stalk

light_chaser
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Peasant

Walkety, walk walk, Stalkety, stalk stalk.
Is the sound of me
I walk
and stalk
right behind thee.

smiley face has a somberero

kevin8ye
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Smiley face has a somberero
and everyone wonders every once in awile
"Now who drew that crazy somberero".
Then nearby, a stalker thinks: i did, i did.

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Through the clouds

FALLEN950
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Nomad

Through the clouds
My thoughts roam
Some of me, you
My mind plots a coup

Through the clouds
My thoughts roam
Some of her, me
What happened to my glee?

Through the clouds
My thoughts roam
Some of the unthinkable

What my thoughts make me do next
Makes the unthinkable come to life

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What happens next?

dair5
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Shepherd

What happens next?
I ask myself as time rushes,
Eager to meet a day I dread.

How shall I prepare for this day?
Should I come unforgiving
With guns at the ready,
Ready to face my doom?
Or should I hold a cloud above my head
And hope the lighting strikes me too soon?

I've been draphted into a war.
One I know that I am going to lose.
All I've done to prepare
Is lock myself in a cage.
Panicked and weeping
Praying this would all go away.

Now I face the fact that this day will come anyway.
And the battle will only last for a day.
But the war will rage forever.



What is this beauty?

kevin8ye
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Nomad

(I think the first line is "What is this beauty"
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The volcano erupted.

dair5
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Shepherd

Oh! Yeah it was. Sorry I didn't notice.

kevin8ye
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Nomad

.... first line???

light_chaser
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light_chaser
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Peasant

The volcano erupted
the goverment is corrupted
I think it is time
to make up a good rhyme.

I fell on me head

kevin8ye
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Nomad

I fell on me head
and slaughtered a shipmate along the way,
then his body went down and hit the ground.
and went right through the ship.
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ARRRRRRR, MATE

kevin8ye
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Nomad

new one.....

NINJA CHOP

FALLEN950
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Nomad

Ninja chop
Eat this slop
Stuck in hell
Ring my bell

No more love
I like it rough
So much pain
But no gain

Ninja chop
Eat this slop


I've all but just forgotten

StormWalker
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Jester

i've all but ust forgotten
what it's like to be
mostquito-bite free

i'm going insane
you try being lumpy
24/7 and going to a creek full of buggy-boos.

i really hate mosquitos
and this looks self centered doesn't it?
well i'm sorry to be vain, but i'm going to go insane

i'm pretty sure it's the end now

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