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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

The sunshine's too bright,
The night is too dark,
The air is too wet
To walk in the park.

Each day I would dream
Of going outdoors,
But nature's regime
Is what I abhor.

you have to give me moody stuff to go on about

Ok

My sorrowful soul sings
MagicTree
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MagicTree
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Nomad

My sorrowful soul sings,
Of that life I once had.
The future, what it brings,
Was torn out of my hands.
Of my body, pain and sorrow are the kings,
and my lonely soul their jester.
A twisted old man's soul begins to sing,
Of what my life could have been.

Next: The Pool of Life surrounds me;

( Lol I don't know)

Riptizoid101
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Farmer

The Pool of Life surrounds me;
It constantly washes my body,
My heart, My soul; It is my life.
Yet, one can't live without strife.
Like one cannot stop the waves
Nor can one stop the echoing of caves.
So, I take it upon myself to turn into ice,
For if I were to freeze one more, that would suffice,
And I look up from the shore into the Atlantic blue,
For I'm coming home, ready to greet you.


A flower will always wither

Raynethx
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Raynethx
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Nomad

hmm how intriguing do continue will you not?

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

A flower will always wither.
Its life will be one of wonder.
Still, death will cut it asunder.
Nature is cruel.
Earth its footstool.
Life and Death, they are a cycle.
Life and Death, they are mystical.
A flower can't always dither.
Death.

Don't let the silver thread fall.

StormWalker
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8,231 posts
Jester

Don't let the silver thread fall
It will land, slowly, slowly,
and then as it does, one causes all
the rest to topple slowly, slowly and
with no sound they've up and vanished,
dead as dead, gone as gone.
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It's unpredictable, never seen before

Riptizoid101
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Farmer

It's unpredictable, never seen before,
An enigma that compels one to learn more,
And it fills small holes, yet new ones, it will bore.
An infinite adventure, it waits to be explored,
Where opportunities can be found, it opens new doors.

Its true nature is perceived as abstruse,

pangtongshu
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Jester

Its true nature is perceived as abstruse,
But without clues, quite obtuse.
Of twos? Nay! He settles more in threes,
But not with trees, and surely not tees.
Tea? No thank you, my dear,
But oh dear, that poor deer.

I killed a deer on my way here

When I twist my hands to twist yours

EmperorPalpatine
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9,439 posts
Jester

When I twist my hands to twist yours,
You slip through my fingers like sand through a sieve,
Wriggling free your slick, silken sleeve
And finding you've achieved
A triumph once more.

Live the lie you love

Maverick4
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Maverick4
6,800 posts
Peasant

Live the lie you love;
Have your freedom, from above.
Kill the truth you hate;
Murder quickly, do not wait.

I float on a sea of glass

OperationNilo
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3,937 posts
Shepherd

I float on a sea of grass,
away from my troubles, in bliss.
But after I took a single bite,
everything soon went amiss.

The night is cold

pangtongshu
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pangtongshu
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Jester

The night is cold,
But not felt with Trevor's hold.
Trevor Newman
Trevor Newman
Trevor Newman
Trevor Newman.

Trevor Newman

Salvidian
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Salvidian
4,170 posts
Farmer

The Trevor Newman
The Trevor Newman is great
The Trevor Newman

Trevor Newman

OperationNilo
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OperationNilo
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Shepherd

Trevor Newman
His name burns hard in
my heart's desire.
And when I long to have him,
I know that he is inside me.
Always.
Trevor Newman.

Trevor Newman.

Maverick4
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Peasant

Trevor Newman:
The god of fools,
Idol to the moronic.
His prophets are idiots,
And stupidity is his church.

Go unto the mountain

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