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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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OperationNilo
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Shepherd

Go unto the mountain,
great explorer.
Unending riches ye shall find.
Enough to end war,
to sate hunger.

I slept last night

MoonFairy
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Shepherd

I slept last night
For the first time in months
Complete, uninterrupted sleep.
And what did I dream of?

Nothing.

The memories haven't faded

bigjacob
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578 posts
Farmer

Everything I see is invisible,
At best, pale outlines and silhouettes,
At worst, I feel nonexistent,
Unsurprisingly, dementia has taken grasp
For as often as I hear their voices,
And even when I make out a faded shape,
Actively moving,
I can't touch them - fate wouldn't allow it
Wouldn't dare let me be assured that this blank limbo-esque nightmare is real,
It doesn't even permit me to take a glance at myself,

Color is a meaningless word to me

K261326
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Nomad

Color is a meaningless word to me
So please don't try to bully me
I only want to set you free
And go on in life like the bird in the tree

My life is full of fantasy

Gantic
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King

My life is full of fantasy.
It's wonderful or can't ya see?
It makes me start a rhapsody.
Perhaps, I'll sway your apathy.

Oh, how it is so wonderful
To live a life so colorful.
No moment passes ever dull,
Like drinking wine from satyr skull.

There's nothing just like counting gold
And swimming in my wealth untold
Or slaying heroes young and old,
And watching evil schemes unfold.

To rule the world, is ever fun.
What can be bad as number one?
It's better than life on the run.
What else is there for ogre's son?

In the end I found a friend

bigjacob
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bigjacob
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Farmer

In the end I found a friend
Perhaps we met by chance, or maybe he was forced into his position?
Sorry, I'll never tell, I simply despise exposition

My name is Osama Bin Laden

MoguMogu1993
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Nomad

My name is Osama Bin Laden
I am a terrorist sent from heaven
You want me to die, ask GOD when
'Coz He and I were friends

I want to eat HOTDOGS

OperationNilo
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Shepherd

I want to eat hotdogs.
I truly do.
Give me one immediately.

Last night [...]

bigjacob
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Farmer

Last night, I found myself lying in a dumpster,
Overjoyed that it was filled with half rotten food which would make a good dinner,
But ticked off that it didn't have my favorite brand of lasagna, and instead had some STUPID CHEAP NO NAME BRAND WHICH DIDN'T COME WITH NONE OF THE GOOD FLAVOR AND DIDN'T SMELL OF TEARS SIRED BY CHILDREN'S SLAVE LABOR! RAGGHHHH BEING HOMELESS SUCKS!

Forgotten I laid, underneath the bed

Charlie506
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Nomad

I like it ze quiet
I love quiet
Gimme quiet

I like it ze quiet
AMEN.

OperationNilo
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Shepherd

Forgotten I laid, underneath the bed,
What has happened to me?
A question I ask too often,
Keeps me from being free.
There it comes again, mad.
What has happened that makes it so?
What action have I committed,
That has put me in a place so wrong?

I do not understand it.
It claims many things.
Lies. The lot.
I cover my ears.

"Who are you now?" it asks,
As if it did not know.
"How have you changed,
why cannot you be like long ago?

I do not answer so stupid words.
It is now reaching for the door.
Bah! Like if I care.
Let her go out and be alone.

"I have lost you" now I hear,
"And now I go out of this door,
and I will find you,
and I will bring you back home!"

OperationNilo
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Shepherd

Hmm, I'm dumb. I forgot my line.

StormWalker
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Jester

Hmm, I'm dumb. I forgot my line.
Said Nilly, forgetting the line that he was going to say
So Storm went on a quest for the sacred ketchup bottle
and hit Nilly in the head with it to restart his brain
However, Nilly fell down and was dead,
so Storm said "I think I dented his brain!"
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I wrote a beautiful poem today

bigjacob
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bigjacob
578 posts
Farmer

I wrote a beautiful poem today,
Though it's certainly not this one.
This one's too nasty for my tastes,
Yet I continue to pound key after key,
My keyboard raw after overuse.
I am sorry for having given this machine so much abuse.
Oh, am I rhyming now? Sorry, I hadn't noticed.
Oh well, it's time for your cue.

This is a live without purpose, devoid of meaning. I love it.

bigjacob
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Farmer

Sorry, I meant to say life, not live.

DON'T KILL ME FOR DOUBLE POSTING, PLEASE!

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