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TackyCrazyTNT
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I decided I'd try and post some of my poems on here, since I liked the first line poem thread so much. I would really like some advice on how to improve. Thanks!

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TackyCrazyTNT
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Reaper looks epic. Just sayin'.


Thanks. XD

Yeah, it looks pretty doodled, I got a little confused with the physics in the first drawing with the chain (is it connected to the blade thingy?) and the blade-thingy, which looked like it went behind her back. Also, the blood is a little... Crooked. Must've been a strong wind... If you spent a little time with her, this could be really good. Not that it isn't


Yeah, the chain is attached to the end of the scythe. :P
I should probably work on that. XD
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****, you guys. I got 100 views overnight and no comments? Way to lurk. :P
Anyways, Wolfeh will be uploaded tomorrow probably, if I can finally figure out how to draw feet.
Then I'll be working on my poem for the poetry contest. For some reason I actually want to polish this one.
And now I'm just speaking to an empty audience. XD

wolf1991
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Way to lurk


Now you know how I feel.
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You are doing wolfeh? Can not be good.


Oh that's hilarious...
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Way to lurk.

1 to 1.5 thousand views on my thread. Probably 10 other people's comments.
Paarfam
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1 to 1.5 thousand views

Scratch that. 17k views.
You are doing wolfeh? Can not be good.

Not to sound strange, but that sounds, um, weird. Just a bit.


Did I comment on your pics of the reaper? If not, it looks a bit rushed. Everything felt, "loopy." It didn't feel help together. If you were to go back and edit it it'd look better in my book.
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****, you guys. I got 100 views overnight and no comments? Way to lurk. :P


*rolls eyes*

Ah, boy, I didn't even recognize this thread for a second. XD

I had to look up "Adroit" in the dictionary.

Anyway, I was going to ask you to do me (?) but I realized you didn't have anywhere to start with me.
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I like reaper. The drawings were a little confusing especially in the second one, but she still looks awesome.

And the reason in my opinion not a lot of people comment on your poetry is because most of them aren't great poets and logically when your not good at something you shouldn't give advice on it.

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And the reason in my opinion not a lot of people comment on your poetry is because most of them aren't great poets and logically when your not good at something you shouldn't give advice on it.

So...
You're saying that 'cause I comment on her poetry means that I'm great? Like, super-amazing-powerfully-masterful-in-every-way kinda way? Just kidding.
Ah, boy, I didn't even recognize this thread for a second. XD

Way to change-thread-name ninja me, Tacky. :P
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So...
You're saying that 'cause I comment on her poetry means that I'm great? Like, super-amazing-powerfully-masterful-in-every-way kinda way? Just kidding.


Lol.

What I meant was that most people that write here are usually writers and poets. Like Moon, you, Wolf....ect.
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I think this is a record for consecutive non-me posts.

Thank you guys for all the compliments! And thanks for the critiques too. *coughpaarfamcough*

Did I comment on your pics of the reaper? If not, it looks a bit rushed. Everything felt, "loopy." It didn't feel help together. If you were to go back and edit it it'd look better in my book.


That's my main problem. When I sketch it out, I don't feel like trying to make it look any better. :/
Chronic laziness.
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Is my picture ready yet?

TackyCrazyTNT
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Record for no postings by me? I think so.

Blossom of the everlasting tree
Waiting centuries to be free
Rooted to the withered spot
Fated to live and never rot.
Its tangled roots reach ever deep
And to the Earth they forever creep
Holding the jagged rocks together
It will last but till forever.

FLP stuff. Be patient Wolf, but also don't expect too much.

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http://imageshack.us/m/62/4892/wolfvi.png

Now you may be wondering what the **** is wrong with this drawing.

The answer is: A lot of things.
1. The paper is wrinkled because I tried to bring it to school without a folder.
2. The shading is crappy because I can't shade
3. There's a random coyote/wolf/demon in the background because I wanted there to be something to help draw the attention away from the horrendous drawing.
4. Wolf has wolf feet because I can't draw people feet.
5. Wolf's proportions are wrong because I can't draw proportions.
6. Wolf has no face because I was afraid I'd mess that up too.

There's probably something I missed, but that's it for now.

Also, 10,000 views!!! Thanks to all of you that read my poems and things!

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6. Wolf has no face because I was afraid I'd mess that up too.


He has half of a face, it looks like to me.

I think the proportions are fine. Most likely because I'm uneducated in the ways of art, but they're fine to me nonetheless.

The coyote in the background was a pretty nice touch, actually.
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