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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Darktroop07
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2 second response
really Seriously.
That is one creepy haiku.
what is in your mind?

murasaki9
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What's in my mind
What is in my mind
does he really want to know
I wonder, he asks

Darktroop07
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Response
I did not at all.
For you questioned me before.
Yet my legs still hurt.

Darktroop07
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Ebony Flames.
It burns with darkness.
It leaves no traces behind.
It burns forever.

Darktroop07
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Ebony Flames.
It burns with darkness.
It leaves no traces behind.
It burns forever.

murasaki9
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@Chris707, ah, those aren't haikus.
Please feel free to post haikus here but
other poetry will have to be posted elsewhere.
Sorry.

killersup10
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say this in a boxer announcer voice....


hit the lights,he back
and black,like a yak attack
HE IS......KILL-ER-SUP!!!!!!!!!!

Darktroop07
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My style
I wear pure ebony.
Some times I wear bright colour.
But I prefer black.

Jazmoon
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Fav T
Colour of dark sky
long skinny, lady who dose cry
jeans tight fav of mine.

Wearing it now ;P

lC4l
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Nomad

Death

A twilight forest
at the end of the tunnel.
Beauteous, tranquil.

Darktroop07
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@lC4l I truly love your haiku.
Rebirth
I have been reborn.
From death's insanity.
I shall become sane.

Jazmoon
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Peasant

Lost satisfaction
Twisted vanes to temted soul
inky vision of past.

murasaki9
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Thank you all for the thought provoking Haiku's.

Tunnel
This strange light burns on
It sets a fire in all souls
driving them to fear

Life
A dear, well read book
but so forgotten, so trite
it is become blank

killersup10
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to **** lazy


i am so very lazy
to lazy, make a title
for me,please

Darktroop07
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Title.
Title everything.
For title's make haiku's nice.
Is this good for you?

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