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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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lC4l
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Nomad

Life
I journey on forth,
searching for my place on Earth
and that special one.

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

Electricity
It is everywhere.
it is in nature itself.
it has no limits.

killersup10
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Blacksmith

suckish title


dude,that title was
quite goodish,ya know.but still
titles are needed

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

I won a contest
now I deserve a merit
I can't believe it

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

Dandelion's
They twinkle in gold.
They gracefully dance along.
As the wind passes.

lC4l
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Nomad

Boredom

It just seems to stay
Stretching seconds into hours
Of this summer day

lC4l
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Nomad

Mistake

The last line is wrong
Of is supposed to be On
How foolish of me

lC4l
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Nomad

Maybe...

Second Thoughts plague me
I can't seem to correct that poem
Is it Of or On?

lC4l
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Nomad

Argh!

So many mistakes...
Thoughts shouldn't be capital
I am frustrated

murasaki9
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Ah, DT took my sublime erm, creative advice.

Not to worry, friend
IC41, you are here
and welcome always

lC4l
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Nomad

Reassured

The words warm my heart.
The tension leaves my body.
I type this haiku.

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

@murasaki
DT07 did.
For Fredrick doesn't forget.
Please give me a theme.

murasaki9
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Who in the Land of Sakes is Fredrick??

Here's a new theme. Otters

Please keep this bright fire
keep it close to your cold heart
and it will warm you

Darktroop07
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Otter
The lazy otter.
How it floats on the water.
With its lazy look.

Darktroop07
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Unpreventable death
The cold heart of death.
Shall kill all opposing.
for it is pure death.

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