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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Skeleton_Pilot
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I am a grizzly.
I'm not very poetic
So just bear with me!

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

Dolphin
The dolphin leaps out.
Splashing its way through water.
It explores the sea.
Peaches
They have good texture.
Though they can become bitter.
They are still tender.

Next theme mura

Jazmoon
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Peasant

Murasaki
My friend she is kind
unicorn bow sweet harmony
she loves kitty cats!

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

Cat's
The neko's live on.
For cats are adorable.
All love the neko's!

murasaki9
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Next theme mura Well,well... frequent, that's the new theme. Frequent. Try it on for size, DT.

Jazmoon
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Summer in UK
Constant pitter patter fall
rain of shadow, grey sweet call
Days were tree grow tall

Darktroop07
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Frequent.
The beat continues.
Going along with music.
Keeping its motion.

Not an easy theme...

murasaki9
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Not an easy theme...

Not easy, hey, you're the guru of Haikus!
Want another theme yet?


Friends lost and of old
I had found a friend
but I lost them to the tide
of time and of pain
Ernie15
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I'm getting older
While my bladder is shrinking.
I get up. Nothing.

Darktroop07
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Sure but I'm better with dark haiku's and sad haiku's that's my specialty especially the one's that are depressing as you always rub it in my face XD.

Jazmoon
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Fine DT07 how about the next theme be lost love make it as dark as you want ;P

murasaki9
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Sure but I'm better with dark haiku's and sad haiku's that's my specialty especially the one's that are depressing as you always rub it in my face XD.
Okay, okay, I'll chose a dark theme for you. Dedicate this one for my long lost friend: lonely

Darktroop07
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Lonely
Nobody adds me.
For I am a nobody.
I am in safe hood.
Lost Love
I confessed to her.
She broke me into pieces.
She regrets it now.

Ernie15
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Sure but I'm better with dark haiku's and sad haiku's that's my specialty especially the one's that are depressing


An enlarged prostate isn't depressing enough for you? You aren't at all perturbed that there's nearly a 50% chance that your prostate will enlarge severely between the ages of 50-80? And that it's very possible that it could happen any time after the age of 25?

You kids don't worry about the right things.
murasaki9
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An enlarged prostate isn't depressing enough for you? You aren't at all perturbed that there's nearly a 50% chance that your prostate will enlarge severely between the ages of 50-80? And that it's very possible that it could happen any time after the age of 25?

Oh, for God's sake, did you have to say that?? Can we keep this thread family friendly? No more mentions of such things. I don't want discussion or mention of anything that should not be talked about in public. Hear?
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