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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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lC4l
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Alone

I beg and I plead,
But my cries go unanswered.
They just ignore me.

Skeleton_Pilot
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@ s9b1
That's a nice poem but it isn't a haiku! A haiku has a specific syllable count:

5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

Darktroop07
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@Skeleton_Pilot.
Totally agree.
Haiku's must follow that rule.
Somehow don't.

Darktroop07
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Oops!
Totally agree.
Haiku's must follow that rule.
Somehow poem's don't.

Skeleton_Pilot
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If it refuses
To follow the haiku rule,
It's not a haiku.

acmed
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As a welcome back,
I'll take a picture of me!
...Of me in the nude.

GraySpiritStag
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Nomad

Summer

Sun starts through dry leaves,
trees beg to shadow and shade,
cracked ground thirsts for rain.

murasaki9
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I don't get this topic a lot, but I do some as like the example in the first page.

Like a river,
Like the wind,
you can't feel them,
you can't talk to them,
but they do talk to you,
they flow inside of you,
make relax your mind,
and love the sweet,
that you will never forget!


I really like your poem, but unfortunately, it isn't a haiku. You are welcome to come here to post haikus!

As a welcome back,
I'll take a picture of me!
...Of me in the nude.


Ah, uh, Acmed friend
while that is hilarious
please do not do it
Darktroop07
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Next theme please XD DT07 needs a theme to write a haiku XP.

Faunbard
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As a welcome back,
I'll take a picture of me!
...Of me in the nude.

Lol acmed... plz dont post this 'icture' online.. No offense i like my eyes and dont want to go blind. Funny Haiku
murasaki9
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Next theme please XD DT07 needs a theme to write a haiku XP.
Okay, okay, here you are, DT. Chocolate

curious patience wanes
and I find myself flying back
to you and to us
Faunbard
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Chocolate is the theme, hmmmmmm?

The swirling river
Flows like a silky current;
Chocolate tastes good.


Is chocolate three syllables, or two? :/

Darktroop07
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Chocolate.
So bitter yet sweet.
I truly love chocolate.
It melts in your mouth.

Skeleton_Pilot
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Lol... I'm sure it's a three-syllable word, but I've never heard it pronounced that way! =P

Milton S. Hershey,
You deserve a Nobel Prize
In the candy field!

Faunbard
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CHOCO-LATE lol
Deep down in my heart.
Chocolate is two syllables,
Skeleton Pilot


Haha. I only used 2 syllables 4 chocolate

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