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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Skeleton_Pilot
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It has its moments
And it's a classic cartoon
But it isn't great!

murasaki9
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Don't tell me you've never watched Courage The Cowardly Dog! =O

I don't have cable.

No is it any good ?(Never watches TV doesn't even care)

This pretty much sums me up too.

Single Handedness?.. is that a word?
I beat them alone.
I was outmatched I still won.
With pure intellect.
I take that back this one is difficult XP, and I thought the courage one was quite cheesy.

Yes, single handedness is a word. That was a good haiku. I'm trying to make it as difficult as possible for you! ;D

Take it away now
I do not want to see it
I have no time left
Darktroop07
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Yes, single handedness is a word. That was a good haiku. I'm trying to make it as difficult as possible for you! ;D

Well I'll make sure to keep surprising you XP.
[b]SURPRISE![/B]
I scare you badly.
You slap me yet you're laughing.
You have been freaked out.
Annihalation
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This thread looks pretty old. I know, I'll do a haiku for it!

Old Threads
This thread looks real old
The ends are frayed and faded
Wait that can't be right...

And another about haikus!

I like some haikus
but some haikus don't make sense
Refridgerator

^ I think I've seen that one somewhere... :P

murasaki9
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Well I'll make sure to keep surprising you XP.
SURPRISE!
I scare you badly.
You slap me yet you're laughing.
You have been freaked out.
Haha! Darktroop wins again! D

Welcome Annihalation. This thread is kind of old, if you consider that it's been around since April of last year. Feel free to contribute as many haikus as you want!

I like some haikus
but some haikus don't make sense
Refridgerator

^ I think I've seen that one somewhere... :P

Yeah, that one is kind of cliche. Look back in this thread and you'll see.
Annihalation
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Lets do some about people!

Me, myself and I
We are all the same person
Schizophrenia

Darktroop07
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Annihilation
We took them all out.
Without remorse or pity.
We are cold blooded.
I can't be stopped.

acmed
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The last line... if it went it'd be a proper haiku...

A twisted young fate.
Can the sanity save him?
Or can it kill him?

murasaki9
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Me, myself and I
We are all the same person
Schizophrenia

Uuhhhgg, how frighteningly accurate! I like it!! Thank you for your contribution. I hope you will continue to grace this thread with your pithy presence. Welcome!

For a friend who betrayed --.
There's no greater joy
That I have than to see you
standing all alone
murasaki9
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Annihilation
We took them all out.
Without remorse or pity.
We are cold blooded.
I can't be stopped.
Aaaaaammmm...DT? Is that a haiku?
killersup10
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killersup walks roads
this lonely bullivard
of broken dreams today

Darktroop07
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Annihilation
We took them all out.
Without remorse or pity.
We are cold blooded.

That's the haiku the other part was a message to you, so let me rephrase it I can keep writing haiku's as long as I have a theme XP.

Skeleton_Pilot
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this lonely bullivard
of broken dreams today


Those lines are 6 syllables each... put the "of" on the second line to make it a true haiku!
Salvidian
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killersup walks roads
this lonely bullivard
of broken dreams today


Hello Mr. Green Day fan. FYI, "bullivard" is spelled "boulevard."

This Skeleton shall
Never walk the ground again
His flight is endless
acmed
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We make our glory.
The journey will never end.
For this is ourselves.

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