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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Darktroop07
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@Acmed well DT07 started the dictatorship mura just supported it and became the dictator >.>/

Change
I take one step back.
I think of my past life.
It is time for change.
~DT07

CheapCheep
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Change
I take one step back.
I think of my past life.
It is time for change.
~DT07


I believe the middle line should be 7 sylabbles but the line has only 6. Not trying to be a critic however you may want to fix that.
acmed
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CC's right. Middle line's 6. Not 7.

I just feel like I'm
Stuck in the middle with you.
Trapped in the insane.

Darktroop07
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I believe the middle line should be 7 sylabbles but the line has only 6. Not trying to be a critic however you may want to fix that.

That's what I get for posting in multiple places at the same time Facepalm
Change
I take one step back.
I take the alternate route.
It is time for change.
Happy >.>
acmed
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Do we have to do the theme? Cuz I'm not.

Insanity laughs.
Labrats fight over the food.
The world has come to.

murasaki9
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Do we have to do the theme? Cuz I'm not.
The theme is for Darktroop. If anyone wants to follow it they are welcome to but I guess I'd rather they didn't if they feel resentful about it.

Haha, bless your soul
You think you're in control
Maybe you're crazy...
Darktroop07
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The theme is for Darktroop.

Mine mine alone >.>
Alone
Seldomly sought out.
Easily forgotten by time.
Seeing mundane life.
murasaki9
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[quote]The theme is for Darktroop.


Mine mine alone >.>[/quote] Hahahaha!!
murasaki9
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I should write according to the theme.

Alone.

I am all alone
please don't leave me here alone
Or I will die, lone

CheapCheep
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CheapCheep
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Nomad

Alone

None shall comfort pains
Recieved when living alone
From an empty world.

killersup10
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killersup10
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favorites

they lied about them
their souls cannot tell truth
picking favorites

XStormyVampireX
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New
Greetings Armorgames.
Me: New to this awesome site.
This is a great place.


I'm not the best at haikus.

Darktroop07
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This theme
I wait for my theme.
I wait for this thread to rise.
I can't wait longer.
~DT07

CheapCheep
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Nomad

This theme
I wait for my theme.
I wait for this thread to rise.
I can't wait longer.
~DT07


Same here

I am really bored
No theme for me and DarkTroop
I cry silently

*forever alone* BUT HEY! I got Xbox Live finally! So...thats a plus.
murasaki9
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Welcome, XStormyVampireX!

Sorry, guys!!! I had trouble posting my comments on this thread this past week. So, I've been waiting for it to work!!!
Anyway, without further ado, the new theme is: forgetfulness!!!

..................please..............work.............s.........

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