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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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Hmmm...your haiku looks good as always, DT!

New theme: tribute

Killersup10, your haiku is very good. Deep meaning. Thank you for the contribution.

the leaves fall slowly
touching the water, floating
swimming far away

CheapCheep
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Brothers

Are they nice or mean?
I cant be the one to talk
Cause' I don't have one...

CheapCheep
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Oops, sorry, guess i'm a little late.

Tribute
He who wishes peace
The shall sacrifice himself
To thy Earth Goddess.

CheapCheep
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Sorry for so many posts.

*Thee
Line 2 first word

Darktroop07
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Tribute
I sacrifice you.
I give you up for honor.
For you're my tribute.
~DT07

murasaki9
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*Swoons*
Ah...
*Ten minutes later*
Darktroop, that was such a phenomenal haiku!!
*Calms herself*
New theme: swordmaster

My heart beats anew
at the thought of what you do
every bright day

CheapCheep
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Swordmaster

Theee who swings a sword
Does not make thee a master
For thee is not trained.

Darktroop07
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Sword master
Wields his katana.
Dances with hundreds of blades.
He has mastered all.

Now it's time for DT07 to give murasaki a theme; the theme will be endless agony.

murasaki9
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Now it's time for DT07 to give murasaki a theme; the theme will be endless agony.

Oh??? For some reason I was certain that you wanted me to give you another theme, a DARK theme...

Okay. Endless agony...

The fire rages on
I am caught within this hell,
this endless fury

Good job with the haiku, CheapCheep.

Yah!! Darktroop is a master Haiku'er!!!!
CheapCheep
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Endless Agony

Why must I suffer?
Caught between the wheels of fate
I stay forever.

JimmyDimples
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I'm really famished.
There is no food here but prunes.
Not a good combo.

bj22910
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I feel endless pain
The world has forsaken me
I'm lost to the dark

Darktroop07
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Endless agony
I suffer to life.
For life has forsaken me.
To this endless chain.
@bj22910 I like how we think alike XD.
@cheapsheep you truly categorized agony in a lethal blow.

CheapCheep
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Wait...did you call me cheapsheep? CheapSHEEP?!?

@cheapsheep you truly categorized agony in a lethal blow.


What?!? CheapCheep. I assure you, i'm NOT a sheep. LOL.

murasaki9
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Wait...did you call me cheapsheep? CheapSHEEP?!?

[quote]@cheapsheep you truly categorized agony in a lethal blow.


What?!? CheapCheep. I assure you, i'm NOT a sheep. LOL.

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That was hilarious!!!!!!

Who are we to ask
What place do we have to know
what our futures are

New theme: spacious

Darktroop, did I answer your theme well?
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