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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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CheapCheep
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Spacious

All the space I need.
Space is at my fingertips.
Space is everywhere.

That was hilarious!!!!!!


I'm glad you think so.
Well, anyway, I love coming here to make haikus always.
Hope I do good in the other poetry competitions!
Darktroop07
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Spacious
I further myself.
Keeping myself closed from you.
I am far away.
and I liked your haiku mura and I clearly see the agony ahead.

murasaki9
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Spacious
I further myself.
Keeping myself closed from you.
I am far away.


Darktroop is definitely a pro!

New theme: hopelessness(trying to stay true to Darktroop's dark nature.)

and I liked your haiku mura and I clearly see the agony ahead.
I feel accomplished!

There is nothing gone
when all the world is sleeping
we can only hope
Darktroop07
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Shepherd

New theme: hopelessness(trying to stay true to Darktroop's dark nature.)

Finally a very good theme XD.
Hopelessness.
Fear overruns me.
Death is crawling towards me.
I can not escape.
Darktroop is definitely a pro!

I'd say novice at best since I'm new to haiku's XP.
GhostOfMatrix
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Herald

No title.

The time of relief;
discharged from mundane duties.
Use your days wisely.

CheapCheep
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CheapCheep
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Nomad

Feels like Darktroop keeps winning. lol.

Hopelessness

No hope in living
There's no hope anymore.
I face hopelessness.

acmed
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acmed
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Nomad

Nature pushes love.
The breeze of matrimony,
Our wind of glory.

TheGodofTechno
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TheGodofTechno
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Nomad

I must say, I love Haikus. I hope to help out with this thread and post lots in time. <audio src="http://k005.kiwi6.com/hotlink/407365620c/Techno_Trance_Runaway.mp3" controls autoplay hidden></audio>

GhostOfMatrix
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Herald

May or may not post this in the haiku contest.

Roaming through the town,
blissful experiences.
Trapped in a dream haze.

Currently trying to change the whole thing to make it better.

Haikus are so restrictive.

acmed
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Haikus are so restrictive.


Your mom is so restrictive.

If silence were gone,
The peace of earth will shatter.
Deaf to the weakness
murasaki9
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Feels like Darktroop keeps winning. lol.

Murasaki tries hard not to pick favorites.

Acmed returns???

New theme: Change

These winds of change blow
trying to drag me away
hoping I'll fall down

But I will not move
nothing will stand in my way
I'll go on, the same
GhostOfMatrix
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Nothing to do with the theme.

The canvas of life;
painting your alluring fate.
Unique artistry.

Spent some time trying to think of a word to replace alluring and a better third line, no luck.

Other second and third lines I had written:
your paint brush constructing plans / designing your destiny / dreaming about the future
Imagination / Artistic prowess

CheapCheep
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Nomad

Change

Everyday the same
It's time to try something new
Its time for a change.

VirtualLife
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VirtualLife
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Nomad

I'm bored and haiku is fun...so I'm going to give it a shot

Bombs fall far away
Our hands are covered in blood
Only we are to blame

I hear the tick tock
Father time is growing older
Taking us with him

Only you did the crime
And yet only I did the time
Now does that seem fair

We were not ever friends
We sit here as the world ends
Pretending we're friends

The gentle boom boom boom
Tells me that it is all over
I will wake up dead

acmed
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acmed
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Yes. I've returned after a long time of absence.

But WHOA! WHY ARE THERE THEMES! I THOUGHT THIS WAS A FREE COUNTRY!

Tadpole swims along,
Before the current drags him.
And hop he goes now

....


AMERICA

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