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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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dair5
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Shepherd

I submited one too. But it's suckish, I just did it because the theme was personification. I really like personification.

I long for this time.
Hold me in your warm embrace.
Your light loving touch.
acmed
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Nomad

I love this place...

Hurricane (in memory of victims of Irene)

The storm be coming.
With winds and rain. Love and pain.
Circling our souls.

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Thank you all! You're all such an inspiration!

Us
With love and honor
we will keep this place shining
through thick and through thin

acmed
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Nomad

Alone

Others with others.
The company of myself
Just is not enough.

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

wow! 8,000 views! I wouldn't have been able to do this without you guys! Thank you!

Random
How long will I wait
my patience starts to run out
I cannot wait now

acmed
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Nomad

Voices

These voices I hear.
How do I know what's good? Bad?
Prime or evil souls?

Xborn2BWildX98
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Nomad

The clear sky

contrails of planes:

flight of love.

Imagine this haiku at high noon when the spring season is a little warm and things are lively after the freezing snow has melted:



Evening breeze.

hanging swinging in the air

a spider's web.






[b]THE LAND

acmed
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Nomad

@Xborn, a haiku's syllables are a 5-7-5. You posted a 3-4-3 and a 3-7-3.

Xborn2BWildX98
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Nomad

i know it just sounded beautiful,so i put it up on the haiku page.

acmed
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Nomad

i know it just sounded beautiful,so i put it up on the haiku page.


But you should really post Haiku's on the haiku page. If you want to show poems, make your own thread for your poems.
Xborn2BWildX98
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Nomad

ok fine and you messed up to,you put a 4,7,4

acmed
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Nomad

you put a 4,7,4


It's syllables, not words. Eve-ry. 2 syllables.
Xborn2BWildX98
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Nomad

are you my language arts teacher in disguise,or are you just trying to give me a Lecture?

acmed
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Nomad

are you my language arts teacher in disguise,or are you just trying to give me a Lecture?


I'm actually trying to teach you what a haiku is, and you didn't understand it. So I explained it.

Now back on topic:

Sun

Light the world with bright.
Let me see the Earth around.
And then sleep, at night.
acmed
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Nomad

Xborn, you know it says specifically in this forum rule thread that plagiarism is not allowed:

PLAGIARISM WILL NOT BE TOLERATED


Please don't do that.
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