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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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dair5
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Shepherd

What's this pain I feel?
It's whenever you are near.
Deep inside my heart.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Regret looms above:
Haunting shadows from my past.
I'll never be free.

knight_34
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Farmer

A wise sage once said
productivity is lost,
by reading haiku.

deathopper
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Nomad

Writing this haiku,
Remembering why I quit.
Still not coming back.

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

I'd like the nonsense on page 30 NOT to continue or start up again. Thank you for your cooperation.

Thank you for your haikus Dair5. Even though they are sad.

Warning
You catch me off guard
I'll be more dangerous
you'd better beware.

murasaki9
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Strong
May the wind blow soft
let not the fierce gales move you
stay rooted and strong

May it be
May it be your wish
not to see me forgotten
May I be recalled

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

A torrent of hate
Rains down from ominous skies,
Blinding every hope.

acmed
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Nomad

Seven five seven.
One paragraph says a lot.
And it means so much.

dair5
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Shepherd

We run in circles.
Having fun along the way.
You and I alone.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Time is running out:
Live each moment as your last,
Because it might be.

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Jeol, your haikus are triumphant.
Emperor, your haikus are almost fatalistic, if I know what I'm talking about. I still like them.
Dair5, your haikus are dark and mysterious.
But, guess what??? I love ALL you guy's haikus!! Keep up the victory work!
WOW! 8,800 views! I'm going for 10,000!
My Haiku Land is growing faster than I anticipated!

Murasaki-Life 03/16/11
Without a Soul gone
is the pure essence of us
for by it, we are

I hope I didn't already post this one.
Or this one:

Murasaki-Ciao 03/16/11
Farewell? Goodbye? No.
Greeting. I am your servant
most literally.

vinster132
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Jester

I am very bored
Nothing but homework all day
I have had enough

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Sorry, DB.
Acmed, your haikus are the life of the party!
Thank you for your contributions.

acmed
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Nomad

Acmed, your haikus are the life of the party!


I now feel complete.

Revived

Thank you for the care.
Revived, purified, I'm back,
And Invincible.
murasaki9
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Blacksmith

I now feel complete.I learned something today! Words are so important!

I now feel complete.

Thank you Acmed!
I'll make you me No. 1 Haiku Land member!

Histry
Life will go on here
I will keep writing poems
and making histry

I know, I know. Histry's not exactly a real word. I just had to stretch the rules a littttle bit...
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