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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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acmed
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Nomad

Christmas

Jesus's birthday.
Gifts of happiness and joy,
And love to the world.

dair5
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Shepherd

Emp's a gold knight now.
Acmed is a silver lord.
I rank up too slow.

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Thank you thank you thank you all!

My joy overflows
I cannot stop smiling
it's off to bed now

Again, thank you all for making this possible!
Peace out, World!

acmed
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Nomad

Why do you say thank you everytime you post?

Hold my hand

Take my hand a fly.
Me and you can soar the world.
Now, just hold my hand.

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

The wind keeps blowing
fall is definitely here
I want winter now

acmed
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Nomad

Water

Splashes me with cheer.
With the liquids of the world,
Keep me company.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

As the night begins,
A fateful choice arises:
Homework or sleep?

acmed
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Nomad

Warmth

Warms me to the skin.
Comforts me from head to toe.
Please don't go away.

murasaki9
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Don't lose that warmth, Acmed, whatever you do.

Reply to Emperor
May I please suggest
that your homework should be last
your sleep should come first

Another fall haiku:

The first drops of rain
the first gusts of vy'lent wind
fall is really here

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Homework or sleep?

Whoops that's 4 syllables.
Rewrite:

As the night begins,
A fateful choice arises:
Homework or slumber?


Looking down the street,
A painful realization:
Someone stole my car!

(not really)
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murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Have you decided?

My day has been good
I'll sleep well tonight I'm sure
good night evry one!

not really

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Tonight, is the night
that we go out of control
tonight is our night!

Sound familiar?

dair5
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Shepherd

I am letting go.
Love, hate, all down the river.
Life. What is its worth?

Now read the first words from each. (I know real original. *sarcasm*) It's corny but I like it anyway. It's the only almost decent Haiku I've done in a while.

murasaki9
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Decent haikus? Hm. I'm no judge of haikus, just a lover. Keep it up, Dair5.
*aside* Yes, Acmed and Dair5's haikus are the most interesting.

This is the best thing
to rule Haiku Land frev'er
it's the bestest thing

dair5
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I fall. Please catch me.
You do. And say I love you.
We're falling again.

I hate when the symbolism isn't clear. So... the "falling" symbolises falling in love.

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