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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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dair5
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Oh, and I'll only call my haiku's "decent" when I absolutly love them. I'll rarely ever call my work "good". I like my opinon and if I think it's good then that's fine. But I usally don't tell others that. I want them to judge it.

I give you my trust
Will you give me yours? No?! Well...
Then this awkward...

dair5
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Shepherd

ARG!!! sorry for the triple post and rage. 1 mistake will ruin the entire haiku.

I give you my trust
Will you give me yours? No?! Well...
Then this is awkward...

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Tears fall heavily
Into the grave of sorrows;
Bury them for now...

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Aww, everyone! The haikus become more and more poignant with each passing day. I feel like we could communicate through them.

Let our sorrow leave.
we will all be loved fully
we are together

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

I love all haikus
they've clarity all their own
they're the soul poetry

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Life is so very
Life is so extre-eemly
Life is so likely

My abstract mind working there.

acmed
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Nomad

A Hole in my Heart

With love to fill with,
The hole in my heart,
Can't be filled, alone.

acmed
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Nomad

Stars in the Sky

Dreaming of the stars.
Dreaming of running away.
Stars. Let me dream on.

murasaki9
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Acmed *dreamily* I love your haikus. They are like living entities with hearts and souls of their own. It's so surreal. Thank you!

My love continues
My passion keeps on growing
Everything heart

acmed
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Nomad

Acmed *dreamily* I love your haikus. They are like living entities with hearts and souls of their own. It's so surreal. Thank you!


Thanks man. I'm very passionate when it comes to haiku's.

Spider

Eight legs of freedom.
Running and crawling spider.
Adventure awaits.
murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Thanks man.

Btw, I'm a girl. I'd prefer if you didn't address me that way. Thank you.
acmed
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[quote]Thanks man.


Btw, I'm a girl. I'd prefer if you didn't address me that way. Thank you.[/quote]

Fine... "Lady Person"....

Simply Complicated

What's easy is hard.
A challenge for me and you.
Stop. I'll guide you through.
dair5
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Shepherd

You beat on my heart
But I can't and won't fight back.
Just leave my heart be.

acmed
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Nomad

A Whisper in the Wind

A silent breeze speaks.
Telling me, to fly away.
Not now. I shall stay.

murasaki9
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Fine... "Lady Person"....

Thank you, Acmed. Believe me, I appreciate it.

This is my saying
ask not, get not, love not, lose
cry not, worry not
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