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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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Wow, almost 11,000 views. It took a lot, but finally I feel as if my hard work and the loyal support has actually amounted to much.

My victory flies
I stand on a conquered field
I am now complete

acmed
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Wow, almost 11,000 views. It took a lot, but finally I feel as if my hard work and the loyal support has actually amounted to much.


It seems haiku's are saying so much about each other. It's very inspiring.

Sickness

The incurable.
Shed me with knowledge and hope.
Puking up sadness.

Incurable
dair5
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Shepherd

I've seen you so much.
So why? Why can't you see me?
Accept the real me.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

When the true test starts,
When everything's on the line,
Will you be prepared?

acmed
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Nomad

Truth

Can a lie kill you?
Let the truth come down on you.
Trustworthy, to me.

dair5
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Shepherd

I feel too much pain.
It has been ingrained in me.
Just try to be nice.

acmed
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Nomad

Living on a Lie

Shall I take the chance?
Harming my family? Friends?
Rather die, than lie.

dair5
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Shepherd

Then just speak the truth.
When you feel there's nothing left
then that's when you're done.

acmed
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Nomad

@Dstar98, the haiku's here are supposed to be made my you. I've heard that a million times before. Please make your own haiku's.

EmperorPalpatine
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Failure makes you strong,
But can make you seem weaker
When you fail two times.

Humm, seems to be missing a syllable. D: Needed changing anyways.
Long ago, washed away
By the waves of abasement,
I shall not be saved.

"Long(1) a(2)go(3), washed(4) a(5)way(6)"
dair5
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Yep. In(1) spi(2) ur(3) ing(4).

Nature is up next.
And I must summon my best.
For mav's last judgeing.

Is that how you spell judgeing? It looks weird.

acmed
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Is that how you spell judgeing? It looks weird.


It's judging. Wake up and smell the Google Chrome spell check...

Smiles

Beauty of the face.
Whitened teeth and happiness.
Forever a smile.

Is smile 2 or 1 syllables?
dair5
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Acmed it's 1. Wake up and smell the howmanysyllables.com no really, they have that! I use it often.

dair5
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Shepherd

I'll devour them.
Yummy peaches fill me up.
Food poisoning? *hurl!*

acmed
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the last line was intentionally four syllables... :P


http://alltheragefaces.com/img/faces/large/surprised-gasp-l.png

Call

It's just that one call
That can make me your one love.
"Hello"... Sounds perfect.
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