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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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acmed
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Breathing this Air

Together, right here.
For as long as I'm around,
This. The air I breathe.

dair5
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Shepherd

ASTHMA

The air I can't breathe.
It's all lost in my throat now.
The air around me.

acmed
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Nomad

Nation

Nation. One for all.
Hand by hand and side by side.
Unbreakable strength.

dair5
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Shepherd

M.A.D

M- together we
A- assured ourself this was
D- easy way out.

acmed
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Nomad

Guilty

One goes unpunished.
He who feels sorrow on one,
Is a brave young man.

dair5
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Shepherd

Fire on my soft cheeks.
Water drowns my fragil lungs.
I.V misses vein...

My haikus are reflecting my life now... The next WILL be happy. It will.

dair5
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Shepherd

Triumph is in reach.
But the real victory is,
You. Waiting for me.

acmed
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Nomad

Victory

Through the finish line.
The reward of the inside,
Pride shown on outside.

EmperorPalpatine
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(Perhaps we should do haikus based on a word from the above user's haiku for a while...)

Outside

Beyond these thin walls
Is freedom for those brave souls
Who wish to escape!

Koru7
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Nomad

Spinning world

This confusing word
it spins and progresses fast
Balance, a hard grasp

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Wouldn't that be a bit like the FLP? :P

Sort of, but it wouldn't be quite as dictated. You've got about 4 or 5 decent versitile words (after you take out filler words like conjunctions and pronouns) to chose for a topic which seems more open than being forced to use a given line/idea.

Grasp

Hold on to the past;
Only memories remain;
Never let them go.
dair5
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Memories

Memories of past.
I cannot relive. Pain fills,
The hole in my brain.

I kinda like the idea.

acmed
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Nomad

Revive

Up, ready to go.
Soul purified. Brain superb.
I have been revived.

EmperorPalpatine
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Continue

Press on and don't stop;
Not one step back, or you're dead:
Never surrender!

acmed
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Surrender (I like the continuation idea Emp!)

Both hands in the air,
You have taken my whole soul.
Just despicable.

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