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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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Emperor, your haikus are so far from impassive.
Sometimes, you outdo Acmed. Sometimes, you outdo yourself.
Sometimes, I just can't decided.

We try to guard this
silent, loud trap of poison
it is called the tongue

dair5
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Shepherd

We can't guard the tongue.
The guard is always sleeping.
The tongue is awake.

Koru7
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Nomad

sickness overtakes
this disease is like hell
recover your health

dair5
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Shepherd

I think your 2nd line only has six.
this(1) dis(2) ease(3) is(4) like(5) hell(6). Sorry in advance if I'm wrong.

Don't get me angry.
I won't throw a fit, or cry.
But I'll die inside.

acmed
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Nomad

Darkness

Light's archenemy.
Pure evilness in darkness,
What I feel inside.

Sorry in advance if I'm wrong.


You are always wrong.
murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Series - part one
He was a happy
he haply stole a cookie
then he ran away

part two coming soon...

acmed
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Nomad

Never had Heart

One never had heart.
One lived to tell a sad tale.
One gigantic fool

dair5
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Shepherd

Three. Were all in love.
Two. Were filled with hate, and lust.
One. Just had to go.

Koru7
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Nomad

mistakes are human
mistakes make us who we are
mistakes meant to be

Maverick4
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Peasant

But who ever said me and Mav were this muscular?


Correction: Who said Acmed was that muscular?
dair5
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Shepherd

You are always wrong.


I know jk.

I think I can but...
When I try to speak to you,
I find myself lost.
acmed
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Nomad

Correction: Who said Acmed was that muscular?


Looks like you made a typo, it's actually "Who said Acmed wasn't that muscular?"

Courage

Brave enough to face,
To beat the man. Be the man.
Head first to the war.
dair5
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Shepherd

I'd like to see you.
I'd love for you to see me.
It would make my day.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

What's wrong with the world?
Can't we all just get along?
Why can't there be peace?

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

I like seeing everyone's haikus collide.

Series - part two
He ran away fast
he hid someplace secret,dark
he ate his cookie

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