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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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Series - part three
Then, an urge struck him
he had to have another
he ventured again

murasaki9
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You know what, before I DB for the fourth time, I should write it all in one.

Series - part four
Into the kitchen
he snatched another cookie
then, he ran away

Series - part five
he hid once more then
swallowing up that cookie
determined one more

Series - part Six
But Calamity
was lying in wait for him
and struck him down, dead.

Wow! Stealing cookies bears such a strong penalty. Death. I wonder what'd happen if I stole a cake? Hades?

acmed
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Nomad

The Wall

The wall is my friend.
The only friend, just for me.
Not moving an inch.

dair5
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Shepherd

Watering Hole

I dig deeper now.
I can't afford to waste time.
Dry. Just like my throat.

Sometimes titles are goo for explaining things. I don't like to use them much though.

acmed
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I like titles. It reminds me of what themes I've done for my haiku's here, and the themes I haven't done. They explain a lot, too.

How to Break a Heart

Surgery can't do.
You broke my heart, right in two.
Forever un-heeled.

dair5
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Envy

I see you with her.
A monster lives inside me.
We'll call him envy.

acmed
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Nomad

The Great Escape

Make me wings to fly.
Far from the ordinary,
You, right next to me.

dair5
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I had mutilple parts. I don't like writing them together, though. People tend to skip long posts. Oh, and acmed titles are ok to me now. Maybe I'll make a title for this one.

Can you forgive me?
Your beauty leaves me speechless.
Though I don't have voice.

I wish I could talk.
I'd let you know how I feel.
And you'd do the same.

But my heart will sigh.
And my mind spins around in loops.
I can't speak to you.

Emotions are rough,
understanding yours, rougher.
I'm seasick with love.

You know how some haikus are random and some are based off your life? Guess which this is.

dair5
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NOO!

And my mind spins around in loops.


And my mind spins 'round in loops.


Phew, ok sorry. continue.
murasaki9
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Dair5, a little humor doesn't hurt anyone. Unless you weren't intending to be humorous.

Series - part Seven
Guess what happened next
curiosity saved him
he lives once again

Love
Anger, joy, envy
love is many faceted
very changeable.

acmed
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Nomad

Change

Don't sin a changed man.
Change is a gift. A gift wrapped
With hope and courage

dair5
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Humor? Yeah Humor! Yep. Heh heh. HEH. HAHAHAHHA. *clears throat.* Humor.

I get up from bed.
Woah! well... this feeling will pass.
Rainbows? CRASH! I fall.

This is 100% true. I once got up to fast and almost passed out. I saw a blur of colors first though. Intresting expirence.

acmed
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Nomad

Rock it out

Shreddin the guitar.
And when in doubt, rock it out,
For the rockin Gods/.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Power is poison:
It surrounds and caresses,
Then it suffocates.

murasaki9
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I'm all heart and love
Break my heart and my love dies
love my heart, love thrives

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