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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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cablecar1
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Nomad

Yummy banana,
How much I loved you, but then,
You were gone; sadness.

acmed
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Nomad

A glance at the clock.
I gotta go gentlemen!
Ha. I sound British.

dair5
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Shepherd

Why do I feel dumb?
Because the haiku I gave
WASN'T EFFORTLESS.

This one...

Rain down my short throat.
The regret down my long mind.
Neither reaches end.


I actually kinda like it.
EmperorPalpatine
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Without a good poet
To give metaphors with joy,
The world would be bland.

Life is a tunnel:
A route to the other side;
Death is at the end.

cablecar1
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Nomad

Or life, everlasting.
Death without a remedy
Is only one way.

acmed
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Nomad

A sweet and sad song,
Comes upon the radio.
Now is not the time...

cablecar1
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Nomad

...To tap dance acmed,
Acmed says quickly, but then
He does so; badly...

acmed
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Nomad

I don't tap dance, man...
I am a salsa dancer!
Me Gusta Salsa.

http://www.805salsa.com/yahoo_site_admin/assets/images/465465.91131823.jpg

dair5
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Shepherd

I used to dance that.
But no more shall I be forced.
I choose my own dance.

acmed
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Nomad

Oh, so you choose dance.
Why don't we choose for one time...
Ha! Ballet dancing!

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Why ballet dancing?
It seems a bit overdone:
I would rather waltz.

acmed
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Nomad

Or would you rather...
SOULJA BOY UP IN THIS OH!
Needed to be done.

cablecar1
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Nomad

I feel limit...
I can't finish a good thou...
Haiku are just aw...

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

That ain't my thang dawg:
I'd rather be shuffulin,
Check out dem moves yo!

dair5
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Shepherd

Just party rock huh?
Well then, you need to see "yes".
LMFAO

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