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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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Okay!!! Acmed! Jeol! This has to stop! It has to stop right
now! It's bad enough you two fighting on your profiles. But
not in Haiku Land. You can't fight here.

I walk in on this
I am struck with knowing not
what is going on


I understand. I wish I didn't know either. But I'm their AG mother, so...
acmed
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Okay!!! Acmed! Jeol! This has to stop! It has to stop right
now! It's bad enough you two fighting on your profiles. But
not in Haiku Land. You can't fight here.


Fine then... jeez...

Always thought of you.
What you did can't be forgived.
Get out of my life.
murasaki9
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[quote]Okay!!! Acmed! Jeol! This has to stop! It has to stop right
now! It's bad enough you two fighting on your profiles. But
not in Haiku Land. You can't fight here.

He started it! He started... Okay. Whatever.

In eternity
I am trapped, Stuck in a hole,
For all time and space.
[/quote]

[quote]Okay!!! Acmed! Jeol! This has to stop! It has to stop right
now! It's bad enough you two fighting on your profiles. But
not in Haiku Land. You can't fight here.


Fine then... jeez...

Always thought of you.
What you did can't be forgived.
Get out of my life.
[/quote]

Doesn't look like anyone's sorry...

What should I think now
is all at rest and calmed down
or am I fooled good
acmed
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Doesn't look like anyone's sorry...


Here goes mom and the guilt trick...

Never say sorry.
Like you've ever had a heart.
You are disgusting.
Maverick4
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Critizise me now!
You had ears, but did not hear.
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Maverick4
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Well that was odd...

Critizise me now!
You had ears, but did not hear.
Now cast into Hell.

Angry poetry is angry.

murasaki9
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Here goes mom and the guilt trick...

Never say sorry.
Like you've ever had a heart.
You are disgusting.


Acmed, that was very rude of you. Do you need another session in your room, however short lived?

Critizise me now!
You had ears, but did not hear.
N

What are you trying to say?
acmed
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Love is very warm.
It is like a hand warmer...
That is very warm...

Derp.

Maverick4
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What are you trying to say?


That my computer thought it would be funny to randomly submit my post before it was done. Though I believe I then ninja'd you with the correction.
murasaki9
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Right. I'll take that as a sign that the tiff is over.

Treasure this moment
make me believe in you now
I am trying hard

murasaki9
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That my computer thought it would be funny to randomly submit my post before it was done. Though I believe I then ninja'd you with the correction.


Yes, I saw that. Weird.
acmed
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You got ninja'd twice!
Oh mommy, you so silly!
Wait... Who's our daddy?

*Looks at Maverick*

Maverick4
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WOAH. WOAH. WOOOOOOOOOOOAH.

We are just good friends!
It is not like that! Besides,
You're adopted.

acmed
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WOAH. WOAH. WOOOOOOOOOOOAH.


You don't want to have 2 adorable, yet, slightly psychotic future serial killers as kids?

We ain't adopted.
Mommy told us a story...
YOU weren't in it...

*turns away from Mav*
acmed
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I am so confused...
I'm just gonna be here in...
The corner, and cry...

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