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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Okay you two boys
mommy is just as confused
please try to explain

Maverick4
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Peasant

We ain't adopted.
Mommy told us a story...
YOU weren't in it...


I am the d*mn paterfamillias.

I like how nobody mentions a word about my haiku. XD
murasaki9
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It's a nice haiku, Mav.
I'm just occupied right now and the boys are upset.

dair5
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Shepherd

Lies are hiding truth.
Are you really busy? Or...
Is there someone else?

Someone on the side.
Another thread to trump all.
The mystery man.

murasaki9
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Thank you for the Haiku's Mav and Dair.

Life is tumultwus
we live,we learn, over again
it is a hard path

murasaki9
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This whole confusion
has been caused for no reason
now it is resolved

dudeguy45
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Peasant

I am outside of
an inside joke, i feel dumb
and like an outcast

dair5
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Shepherd

And how do I feel?
Left out of the family.
Not even a cuz. (cousin)

murasaki9
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Sorry guys, Dair and Dude. Yes, you're both right, you are left out and it is an inside joke. Sorry to leave you both out. But how would you fit in? I wonder...

Dair five and Dude guy
one feels like an outcast
the other left out

Maybe you two can join the family. The AG family.

dudeguy45
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Peasant

I'll be crazy, old
maybe a distant uncle
you whippersnappers

dair5
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Shepherd

I wanna be the
Third aunt, seven times removed.
.... Maybe someone else....

acmed
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Nomad

No more family!
Wait, so Maverick's our dad?
That's why I'm ugly!

acmed
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Nomad

So we are not twins?
You were the best bro ever...
Now I shall cry now...

dair5
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Shepherd

You better stop now.
Want me to give you something
to cry 'bout? Hmph. HMPH.

dair5
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Shepherd

I get this feeling...
Like I'm the youngest one here.
Naw, that's stupid. Right?

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