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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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OMG!!!! I'm so glad to be back!!!
Thank you, guys!!! I came back and I was thinking, my Haiku Land, my Haiku Land!!! It's still here! Wow! I thought it'd surely have died!
But no!!

Being back I'm glad
I feel like I still belong
This is wonderful!

murasaki9
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It's hard to come back
sometimes i see all my friends
do they remember?

Zeus01
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A G is the best
I like to play lots of games
Earn some armor points

I haven't written a haiku since fourth grade

Schmiddy1234
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Nomad

The Watery Demon

Releasing anger
killing innocent ship men
having no limits.

murasaki9
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Time falling away
the scales peeling from my eyes
I start to see you

You start to look real
You become less of a dream
And more of a life

(to be continued)

Rapyion
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I wanna try making a Haiku so..

Here.

Happy

Happy as always
Living in a blissful way
Don't leave me now, please..

Sad

Rain pours on my cheeks
Every day tears appear
in my very eyes.

I hope it's good..

murasaki9
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Hi Rapyion, is this your first time here?
If so, Welcome. If not, Welcome Back.
I like your haikus.

Today is the day
he said this to me slowly
So, I just waited

I have been waiting,
but nothing even happened
so, I wait in vain

nichodemus
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I waited six months,
Was crushed by her callousness,
How I curse this love.

Rapyion
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Yeah, it's my first time. Thanks, Murasaki!

Playing

Mom, I am playing,
So, do not disturb me now,
I will rage at you.

Ill

Being ill is bad,
But it is good in some ways,
A way to skip school.

Spinning A Pen

It is way cooler,
Spinning a pen like a boss,
than writing something.

THREE HAIKUS!!

murasaki9
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Wow, three haikus! Thank you, Rapyion.
It's quiet here at the AMW forum.

Please don't make a noise
I will suppress you for now
Please just trust in me

VinceNeille
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She said she loved me
But it's hard for me to tell
Was this love made true?

murasaki9
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Should you believe her
or should you assume she lied
maybe she will say

Perhaps, she will tell
to dispel the mystery
and put you at ease.

VinceNeille
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..But she stays quiet
I'm stuck in a lonely cloud
Confused. In wonder...

murasaki9
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Why will not she speak
Is she afraid of the words
Will she overcome

Yes, she is afraid
is afraid of rejection
for a heart so soft

but are her fears good
is she justified in them
time will always tell

VinceNeille
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"Time will always tell"...
Something I can agree with.
Time is a virtue.

What fun! I wanna continue this again, sometime, Murasaki.

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