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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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DairyHick
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A scuba diver
swims with sharks. But thinks they are
clownfish, 'till they bite.


The wounded diver
Screaming hard with all his might
No sound, mere bubbles
DairyHick
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Nomad

I'm a late sleeper.
It is five thirty and I
Only just woke up.


The boy and his bed
inseparable he claims
Always late to class
ThroatLozenge
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Nomad

[quote]A scuba diver
swims with sharks. But thinks they are
clownfish, 'till they bite.


The wounded diver
Screaming hard with all his might
No sound, mere bubbles[/quote]

Sinking down, he sees
a light. Is it the sun? Or....
Soon enough, he'll know.
DairyHick
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Nomad

A scuba diver
swims with sharks. But thinks they are
clownfish, 'till they bite.

The wounded diver
Screaming hard with all his might
No sound, mere bubbles

Sinking down, he sees
a light. Is it the sun? Or....
Soon enough, he'll know.


Devil smiles at him
regretting his actions now
no more one night stands
Alexistigerspice
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Farmer

Whats with the quoting?
Originality, yes,
But not the standard.

Alexistigerspice
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Farmer

But its a haiku
Not asked as a question, a
Poetic statement.

ThroatLozenge
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Nomad

Haikus are supposed
to be about nature too.
But that gets boring!

A scuba diver
swims with sharks. But thinks they are
clownfish, 'till they bite.

The wounded diver
Screaming hard with all his might
No sound, mere bubbles

Sinking down, he sees
a light. Is it the sun? Or....
Soon enough, he'll know.

Devil smiles at him
regretting his actions now
no more one night stands


Spotlights in stormy
weather. They've been at it for
days. Hope is dwindling.
aamer13
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Nomad

Alexistiger,
very spicy girl,
Why New armater?

Alexistigerspice
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Farmer

^^^Not a real haiku.
To answer your question, though,
Just because I can.

aamer13
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Nomad

Woops made a mistake
Did three , five syllable lines
This is a haiku

ThroatLozenge
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Nomad

The only way to
know how far down it really
is, would be to spit.

I surrender to
the very thought of you. But
it seems you still need.

^ Two haikus today on my haiku blog (link is on my profile)

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

The snow looks like sand
Being whisked across the road
By a gust of wind.

OoberxAllen
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Nomad

Super Bowl four six
New York versus New England
Who will win it, guys?

I'm kinda mad about the division championships yesterday and decided to make a haiku about the Super Bowl.

ThroatLozenge
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Nomad

A lot of water
under the bridge, and a lot
of other stuff too...

---> A Bob Dylan inspired haiku

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Saving Haiku Land
From the abyss of page three.
Revival at last.

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