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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Rapyion
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Yeah, kinda.

Aah! All good haikus. All so.. matching!

The Moon

Why are you not there?
The Moon in the space and sky.
Don't disappear, man!

Twilight

Near the rise of sun,
Not Stephanie Meyer crap.
And not vampires.

Loopy

Loopy as it is,
You will not escape from here.
It goes on and on.

Mouse

Some might say a mouse,
A device for computers,
but an animal.

Batman

He beats criminals,
Can foil Joker's evil plan,
Can't be Superman.

I personally think the Batman haiku is really funny.

kevin8ye
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Nomad

The man in black

the man in black came
and killed the glorious king
and then killed himself

Rapyion
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The man in black haiku is pretty random.

Lights

They are everywhere.
In the grand city at dusk,
In the sun's presense.

The Sky

High in windy days,
Also shown in the night time.
The cool sky it is!

Cars

Vehicles, that is.
Very old or very new,
They are for travels.

Girlfriends

I do not know well,
Relationships and girlfriends,
For they are females.

Earth or earth?

Is it the planet?
Or mud you step on right now?
I don't have answers.

VinceNeille
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Hey, Rapyion. Your hiakus are pretty cool, bro.

Success

Success could be good.
Success could also be bad.
Success is like meds.

Where all my friends?
All of y'all turned into fans.
Success with symptoms.

murasaki9
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I'm so proud of Haiku Land and all its Haiku'ers!

Success is sweeter
Laughter a better reward
so I stay alive

murasaki9
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Things are too quiet in here. Way, way too quiet. I wonder...

Yes, Vince, let's do that again some time. I'll let you start next time though.

Let us go and play
This should be so much fun now.
yah!yah!yah!yah!yah!

VinceNeille
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Things are too quiet in here. Way, way too quiet. I wonder...


Don't wonder too long
I'll have your back to the end,
real friend from the start.
Rapyion
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I'll try to continue.

Real friend I agree,
Not facebookers on the web.
Playing with you is fun!

murasaki9
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Thank you, Rapyion and Vince! AG beats Facebook, in my humble opinion.

I will not go home
I'll stay with you forever
and never look back

murasaki9
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Take this straight from me
I will never back away
At your side I stay

Rapyion
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Aah, Murasaki, something we agree on!

I personally think Facebook is like a prison and you write on walls.

It seems so, my friend.
While you look out for my back,
I look front, trusting.

murasaki9
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Yes, Rapyion.

Friends are good to have
get them, keep them, love them all
and you will be glad.

Rapyion
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The End

I guess it's the end
For you and me together.
You will forget me.

What's Seen Cannot Be Unseen

It is always true
What's seen cannot be unseen.
Your brain will have it.

Armor Games

Armor Games, a site
For flash games to be published
Or forums to join.

murasaki9
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I hope my comment doesn't count as 'resurrecting'.

Thank you for your haikus, Rapyion. Keep up the
good work.

who wants to know this
that i have no other choice
that i'd rather die

than give my life up
than throw away what i have
that i'd rather fight

LordofAges
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Oh jeeze, I love haikus. Mostly because they're very simple yet elegant and take me less then five minutes to write. Therefore, I have a few hundred lying around.

I realize that this one isn't a true haiku, but it still amuses me.

Some say that your face
is the number one disgrace
to the human race.

And another one, for now.

I sometimes believe
nothing is more beautiful
Than a brief haiku.

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