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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Darktroop07
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Death lingers near by.
Life dwindles in fear of death.
Is their salvation.
I'm not very good at this so I'll start practicing.

Darktroop07
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Light blinds man with faith.
Darkness blinds man with despair.
Is their no balance.

I'm still starting out so they might be bad at the moment XD.

dair5
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I'm still starting out so they might be bad at the moment XD.


I like them.

I'm starting out fresh.
But its too bad swans can't see
Their own reflection.
Darktroop07
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@ dair5 thank you a-lot.
The blood of war cry's
The blood of peace begs for help.
The blood of life dies.

I really enjoy reading others haiku's they seem to bring some joy into me.

murasaki9
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Peace
The guns are silent
The battle cries have ended
Peace has returned here


Darktroop07
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Love is raised in tears.
Happiness is raised in joy.
Hatred is born from failure.

murasaki9
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Thank you Darktroop07 for your haiku.

Let it rain for now
I will find you in the end
You need never fear

So he said to me
As I sat there at his feet
Wishing he would stay

And he raised me up
Looking deep into my eyes
And swore this promise

I will return soon
I want you to hope and watch
When I'll be with you

murasaki9
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Now for something a little low-hearted.

He looked at me sad
I asked, what is the matter
But he was too dead

murasaki9
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Wish
Far, far, far away
there is a land so alive
I wish I lived there

Darktroop07
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http://armorgames.com/image/armatar_110_25.25_c.jpg
Hum... you're welcome I guess >.>?
I wished for gold.
Got silver instead of gold.
My wish was useless.

dair5
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Broken boy

I look at myself.
Disgusted by what I see.
A broken boy lays.

This broken boy lays,
Not even moving an inch.
Ignorance pouring.

Stares at what he wants,
And never says a word. But,
A chance arises.

Broken boy can't see.
Broken boy will try again.
But broken boy's blind.

Broken boy's naive.
Broken boy will never see,
How much me hurts me.

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Taken Down

I am taken down.
I can't get back up again.
Because of evil.

War

Why are they fighting?
When the world does not want it?
No one wants to live.

Hey, Adolf Hitler!
Why do you conquer countries?
Because of power?

You power critics!
Making the world a bad place?
I heard Mars is good.

murasaki9
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Water flows
This is what I have
I keep wishing for something
please make it appear

Darktroop07
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My haiku's are gone.
I can not rhyme any more.
I am in despair.

Darktroop07
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I am coveted.
I fear I am too greedy.
Envy is around me.

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