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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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NerdfighterMary
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Nomad

Stars
Out the lights do go,
everyone gets the candles,
I look to the stars.

LordofAges
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LordofAges
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Shepherd

In response to you
To come here regularly
I find difficult

Alexandra222
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Nomad

(I love Haiku since it's Japanese but don't Haiku poems have to be about nature?)

Pretty flowers blome
I love how flowers grow big
They make me amazed

murasaki9
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(I love Haiku since it's Japanese but don't Haiku poems have to be about nature?)


Yes, traditional Haiku's maybe. But Haiku Land welcomes all forms of creativity.
Thank you for your haiku.

To a special friend
Hold me in your palm
and embrace me in your arms
I'll be safe with you
VinceNeille
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Shepherd

Forever with you

Unreasoned passion
Infatuated by you
Your love is so true

Your side 'till life's end
You will find that I am there
Your love, take good care.

murasaki9
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Thank you, Vince. As always, I appreciate anyone's contribution to this thread.

You

Keeping me alive
You hold my heart in your hand
You keep my breath so

dair5
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Sit

Chairs stacked to the sky,
Chair upon chairs piled high,
I'm at the bottom.

People are sat on
all the time. I'm no different.
Just look before you ^^^^^^^^^

Roccess
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Peasant

Do the Haikus have topics? If not, here's one:

Haikus the Haiku

Haikus are easy,
But sometimes they don't make sense,
Refrigerator

dair5
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Shepherd

A day to relax?
One day just to feel at ease.
My weekend was packed.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Monday is coming.
The new week will be here soon.
School begins again.

Do the Haikus have topics? If not, here's one:

They need to be original. That one isn't.
murasaki9
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Aha, Dair5 is back!! And so is the Emperor (and his new clothes. Erm, forget that part)

Stand back
All I want is life
And all I don't want is death
So just stay awy

dair5
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hi

Dominican

Um... I lost my place.
And I know I won't find it.
I'll just make my own.

Words said, never heard

Speaking hurts too much.
I know my words won't get through.
To her with my heart.

I relize, my haikus are very vauge. Hopefully the titles help.

kevin8ye
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Nomad

A quick haiku i made up....


The Death

Death spreads through the world
Killing everything in sight
Soon dooming mankind

dair5
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Even achilles falls,
If a snake bites his ankle.
Don't raise achilles.

murasaki9
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Dair5, your haikus are wonderful.
thank you, kevin8ye.

Speaking
His mouth was moving
I heard his words echoing
There was no meaning.

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