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A haiku i wrote in class I write a lot of poems in class:

Life
Life, the endless road
causses mourning grieving and
happiness, alike

Loneliness

Loneliness, bad thing.
No one ever talks to me.
Why did this happen?

I feel so angry!
It is my fault, messing up
The things I have then.

This is why I'm here.
Along with forum people
Here in Armor Games.

Tis' truly written,
With emotions and feelings.
Thanks, everyone.

Even Facebook there
Will not even satisfy
Me, my loneliness.

I try not to cry.
Manly people don't cry, right?
So what is it now?

Lack of attention?
Or just really, really dumb?
Completely stupid.

They want me to help.
And then, they just throw me out.
Out of the window,

Like the fool I am,
Now and then, past and present.
I feel so worthless.

Thanks, Murasaki,
For the idea of haikues.
I would have expressed

Out of something else,
Maybe it's pain or torture.
Something more cruel?

Now, I write feelings
And the expressions I have
You guys are better,

Than my schoolmates there.
Maybe not even my mates.
You guys are my friends.

My school students there
Don't like poems and haikues.
You feel like hatin'?

This haiku I wrote
In my school as doodling.
What I feel at 8.

In the early day.
My country is different
From your own countries.

And so our schools
Are quite different, really.
No topic to say.

But, I talk to them,
And they just ignore my words.
They don't talk to me.

They never engage
In conversations withme
Nor come up to me.

And so it ends here
Saying my goodbyes to you.
Not forever though.

Wow, Rapyion! Way to go with mastering the Haiku. The more you write the better.

Let this be my time
I won't stop until you're dead
I'll just keep going

Maybe I relent
Maybe I'll try to repent
It's just not easy

This life that I live
I wish it would be over
It's not about you

In other settings
I'll talk about something else
Try to lighten up

I see the light glow
But it sits so far away
And I won't give up

Will this never stop
All this spamming in Forum
they need to be out

What a big relief
the spammers have been locked up
I can breathe freely

your sigh of relief
is going to be short lived
they will be back soon

-Blade

well today was a total ****....


she is not the one
she has been a waste of time
good bye lost love.misses

You I understand.
But they are far too complex.
we understand.

Many friends visit this thread,
Thought I'd come to say hello,
Am I doing this right?

Am I doing this right?

The haiku must follow a 5-7-5 syllable scheme.

your attempt is fine
but there is a trick to this
you will grasp it soon.

-Blade

I wrote this long haiku edition at school today Enjoy:

Armor Games

If you feel lonely
Come and give us a call, yes
You will then feel home

I will be friendly
A lot of others will too
When you're down come here

Not many spammers
But you'll find some here and there
Almost never though

Mods always take care
And keep the junk level down
For thats their own job

Patrolling, strolling
and keeping AG clean
They are helpful, too

Gantic, Zophia
Freakenstein, NoName, Strop(pronounced sturr-op for the sylable purpose )
Asherlee, more

Devoidless, one more
and Mr. Walker, also
thats all the mods now

Did you like it? I definetly had fun writing it

One about turtles i wrote in class:

Turtles

Da Beastly turtle
Was the beastliest alive
No one could stop him

Thanks, Murasaki.

Something I doodled. Although I slept too. -_-

Craziness

I find craziness
Crazy much, obviously.
An act they don't know

And don't understand.
Most of them shout without cause
And causes people,

To think that this man
Is crazy and retarded
And cannot think well.

Some of them shouts, "GHOSTS!!"
"Unbelievable!" They say.
Next is asylum.

Crazy asylums
A place for crazy people,
Criminals alike.

Someone like Joker,
In The Dark Knight, I like him.
Crazily the best.

Back to the topic,
When someone laughs randomly,
We call them crazy.

Torturers are bad,
Almost crazy, I would say.
They enjoy the pain.

As weird as this is,
It will finally end here,
Don't be crazy though.