ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Land

2158 543442
murasaki9
offline
murasaki9
1,388 posts
Blacksmith

I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

  • 2,158 Replies
jkl3848
offline
jkl3848
242 posts
Peasant

Armor Games is cool.
They have fun games and forums.
I like Armor Games.

Bladerunner679
offline
Bladerunner679
2,487 posts
Blacksmith

technology class
where my eyes bleed of boredom
this class is useless

murasaki9
offline
murasaki9
1,388 posts
Blacksmith

I love researching
All week long I get to search
No studying, no

Schmiddy1234
offline
Schmiddy1234
1,075 posts
Nomad

Almost spring burr-ake
Looking forward to no school
It bores my eyes out.

murasaki9
offline
murasaki9
1,388 posts
Blacksmith

It will all be over
and for that I'll be thankful
I will soon be free

Bladerunner679
offline
Bladerunner679
2,487 posts
Blacksmith

temprarily
I won't be free very long
Then I'll have to work

-Blade

murasaki9
offline
murasaki9
1,388 posts
Blacksmith

I tried limericks
my thread soon died a young death
Gnos, I wish you luck

Santi_
offline
Santi_
1,900 posts
Nomad

Uh, it's not working,
Blade I can't reach your profile,
Way too many glitches.

killersup10
offline
killersup10
2,739 posts
Blacksmith

killersup really likes
sad,rebellious songs
they make him feeel human.


but killersup not
human he is a ungodly
riot,great uprising

the ultimate rebel
this is killersup in his
full blasting glory

Schmiddy1234
offline
Schmiddy1234
1,075 posts
Nomad

Murasaki... Do you like my haikus? I just want some feedback That makes Schmiddy happy

Murasaki you like
my haikus? they're fun to write
Do you enjoy them?

Poetry's my thing
My niche in writing you see
I just love poems

Ernie15
offline
Ernie15
13,344 posts
Bard

Murasaki you like


That line you see there
Has six syllables, not five.
It must be revised!
Schmiddy1234
offline
Schmiddy1234
1,075 posts
Nomad

oh oops... i thought mura was one syllable... oops

Schmiddy1234
offline
Schmiddy1234
1,075 posts
Nomad

Here's some more i wrote at school:

MUSIC EDITION!!!

Linkin Park

Linkin Park, awesome sauce
they were better way back when.
But dey still da beast

Metallica

Metallica, YEAH
Their music is just the sauce
The meaning of Rock

Muse

Starlight, Uprising
Two of their songs i like
One of my fav bands

Volbeat

Danish Rock, Unleashed
Feel the power and the punch
In "Warrior's Call"

Rammstein

German at its best
In rock, my favorite tune
"Du Hast" is da bomb

Hope u enjoy

killersup10
offline
killersup10
2,739 posts
Blacksmith

da yoopers also rock
they are the hillybilly rebeles
they rock so hard.not

Schmiddy1234
offline
Schmiddy1234
1,075 posts
Nomad

killersup, funny
That u bring that band thing up
I have homework, now Dx

Showing 1396-1410 of 2158