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murasaki9

1,388 posts

Blacksmith

Posted April 19, '11 11:49pm UTC

I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Darktroop07

3,592 posts

Shepherd

Posted March 31, '12 5:39am UTC

The heat is killer.
I hope it ends very soon.
will winter begin.

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Rapyion

2,300 posts

Shepherd

Posted March 31, '12 3:15pm UTC

Death

Inevitable,
You cannot avoid death
Nor trick death either.

But you only can,
Come face to face with itself
And just die in there.

Then it's funeral.
Of course, it is for the dead
But for you next time.

This is why, really,
You should enjoy your own life
Until it's over.

Of course, pity them
For the work until they die,
For their children.

To love is to free,
But only for animals.
Humans, we hold tight.

But when they all die,
We actually let them go,
Ironically.

This is so awkward
Because I wrote in school
And I am fourteen.

Age doesn't matter,
Only the haiku poems
Matter in this thread.

My grandfather dued
When I was only seven.
Do not grief for me

For I have let go,
My loved one, I am still god,
I wish we're closer.

Very horrific,
I know, but also quite good,
One can rest in peace.

Here lies the stanza
Which I will end with advice.
Live a blissful life.

Unnoticed

Why am I not seen?
When I have written stories?
Was I not good yet?

Acmed, Burning Ice.
His readers wanted a lot.
Maybe his story

Is better than mine.
Burning Ice and Vamp Pyres?
Which will win the fight?

A mod in this site.
Strop, Way Of Moderation.
His was more famous.

Do my stories suck?
Or do they lack interest?
I hope I improve.

[b]Death[/b]\r\n\r\nInevitable,\r\nYou cannot avoid death\r\nNor trick death either.\r\n\r\nBut you only can,\r\nCome face to face with itself\r\nAnd just die in there.\r\n\r\nThen it's funeral.\r\nOf course, it is for the dead\r\nBut for you next time.\r\n\r\nThis is why, really,\r\nYou should enjoy your own life\r\nUntil it's over.\r\n\r\nOf course, pity them\r\nFor the work until they die,\r\nFor their children.\r\n\r\nTo love is to free,\r\nBut only for animals.\r\nHumans, we hold tight.\r\n\r\nBut when they all die,\r\nWe actually let them go,\r\nIronically.\r\n\r\nThis is so awkward\r\nBecause I wrote in school\r\nAnd I am fourteen.\r\n\r\nAge doesn't matter,\r\nOnly the haiku poems\r\nMatter in this thread.\r\n\r\nMy grandfather dued\r\nWhen I was only seven.\r\nDo not grief for me\r\n\r\nFor I have let go,\r\nMy loved one, I am still god,\r\nI wish we're closer.\r\n\r\nVery horrific,\r\nI know, but also quite good,\r\nOne can rest in peace.\r\n\r\nHere lies the stanza\r\nWhich I will end with advice.\r\nLive a blissful life.\r\n\r\n[b]Unnoticed[/b]\r\n\r\nWhy am I not seen?\r\nWhen I have written stories?\r\nWas I not good yet?\r\n\r\nAcmed, Burning Ice.\r\nHis readers wanted a lot.\r\nMaybe his story\r\n\r\nIs better than mine.\r\nBurning Ice and Vamp Pyres?\r\nWhich will win the fight?\r\n\r\nA mod in this site.\r\nStrop, Way Of Moderation.\r\nHis was more famous.\r\n\r\nDo my stories suck?\r\nOr do they lack interest?\r\nI hope I improve.

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killersup10

2,739 posts

Blacksmith

Posted March 31, '12 4:33pm UTC

he prays so much to
pray the failure is hiden
and yet it still comes

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murasaki9

1,388 posts

Blacksmith

Posted March 31, '12 6:16pm UTC

Murasaki... Do you like my haikus? I just want some feedback That makes Schmiddy happy

Yes, I like your Haikus. Don't be afraid to be adventurous! I encourage adventure here in Haiku Land!

Please be kind to me
Or I will not love you back
It is tit for tat

Am I a human
this captcha is asking me
We must stop the spam

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Schmiddy1234

1,075 posts

Nomad

Posted March 31, '12 6:41pm UTC

I know ur human
You don't act as a bot would
And thank you a lot

That was to murasaki, and thanks for the compliement writing haikus is so fun D

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Schmiddy1234

1,075 posts

Nomad

Posted March 31, '12 6:49pm UTC

Random haiku about bananas:
Bananas

Bananas are fruit
They're yellow and grow from trees
And are delicious

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murasaki9

1,388 posts

Blacksmith

Posted March 31, '12 7:16pm UTC

The CAPTCHA is supposed to cut down on spam. I don't find it working. *sniff, sniff*
Keep up the haikus, Schmiddy!!

I want to be strong
And with you by my side now
I'm invincible

*That's a tribute to a friend of mine.

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Ernie15

13,344 posts

Bard

Posted March 31, '12 8:25pm UTC

LORD of onsistro
Why must you be a nuisance?
You irritate us.

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murasaki9

1,388 posts

Blacksmith

Posted March 31, '12 9:12pm UTC

That is an interesting Haiku, Ernie15.

This Captcha thing is
so crazy I'm going home
to hide my faces

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lozerfac3

978 posts

Farmer

Posted March 31, '12 10:01pm UTC

I am a Lozerfac3
I eat grass and monkey brains
Please don't shoot me there.

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murasaki9

1,388 posts

Blacksmith

Posted March 31, '12 10:08pm UTC

Welcome to Haiku Land, lozerfac3.
Please feel free to be adventurous!

I will try to turn
There is this thing I must do
And then I can sleep

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undeniable_fox

17 posts

Blacksmith

Posted March 31, '12 10:18pm UTC

Several haikus on my writing.

If only I tried
Harder than this about my
writing, it could be.

If my writing was
all haikus and not stories
they would be better.

Thank you.

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murasaki9

1,388 posts

Blacksmith

Posted March 31, '12 10:26pm UTC

Several haikus on my writing.

If only I tried
Harder than this about my
writing, it could be.

If my writing was
all haikus and not stories
they would be better.

Thank you.

Welcome! No, thank you! Thank you for posting here!
Feel free to be adventurous!

This is my haiku
if you no likey then jet
I'll see you later

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Ernie15

13,344 posts

Bard

Posted March 31, '12 10:36pm UTC

That stupid CAPTCHA is actually inspiring me to write haikus.

Time ceases to tick.
That Goaster in the toaster
Is only a trick.

I'm also suddenly inspired to rhyme them.

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murasaki9

1,388 posts

Blacksmith

Posted March 31, '12 11:12pm UTC

That stupid CAPTCHA is actually inspiring me to write haikus.

You see? I wasn't crazy when I said there was a CAPTCHA.

I'm stuck in my niche
trying to play shell shock live
it isn't working.

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