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wolf1991
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So, this is a side project I shall be working on. I was somewhat inspired by MoonFairy's and Tacky's thread Adventures of AG: A State of Emegency, and a desire to use my own thread, The Deck of Games, for something a little more creative. The basic premise is the same I'll need you, the users, to create a short character sheet. There are restrictions though:

1. You must be in The Deck of Games
2. The character sheet must be filled out correctly
3. Weapons cannot be modern and must be fantasy related (Swords, bows, magic, ect)

If you would like to be in The Deck of Games, see this and comment on which possition you would like. Also, please provide a good reason as to why, I shall not accept reasons like: because I am like, good!

Now, the character sheet.I will use my personal one as the example you MUST follow.

Name: Wolf
House: High House Tragedy
Position: King
Weapon:Hand and a half Sword
Bio: A wanderer of far off lands and a master of the sword, Wolf has lost all that he once held dear. Posed as the King of High House Tragedy he has degenerated into a cynical and bitter man, infected by sadness.
Description: Wolf has shoulder length dark brown hair. He is of average height and build, having mostly wirey muscle. He only possesses his right hand having lost his left in a duel years ago.

If I have time, I may create pictures of the cards based on your descriptions of your characters. Well, I can't draw, so I may ask someone else XD

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wolf1991
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Well I have enough characters to work with I suppose, but I'd still like a few more. Maybe two or three. SI VOUS PLAIT LURKERS!

Nurvana
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Awesome job, actually. It's a great story.

Maverick4
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I made a cameo!

I like the story so far, and its developing quite nicely. Keep it up m8.

wolf1991
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Wolf looked out across the plains and rolling hills from atop a small ridge. Off in the distance was an indistinct outline, it could have been anything.

"We're almost there," he said to himself

Over hearing him Mood said, "You know it's farther than it looks right?"

"Yeah I know. But, still it's been too long."

"How long?"

Wolf shrugged. Drape only knew how long. "Drape's Tits, I've no idea, at least ten years."

Moon raised an eyebrow, "Who's what?"

Wolf grinned, "I found a new religion while I was travelling."

Moon burst out laughing, staggering to the side she tripped over her bedroll and fell hard. She laughed hard, "You?! You hate religion."

Wolf scowled, "The difference is these gods are real. I'll introduce you to Drape some time."

He turned his attention back to the distance. Armagia he thought, It's been too long. Far too long. When did I last walk your streets? Ten years...at least. I had the Deck then. I painted the first cards there...didn't I? He shooks his head.

Moon flitted down the rough game trail that lead from the ridge, looking back over her shoulder, "You coming?"


Two days later they arrived at the gates of Armagia. The iron wrought gates were slightly weathered and rusted, people moved with a furitive look. Wolf kepts his hand on the pommel of his sword.

"What the hell happened to this place?"

Moon shrugged, "Hard times Wolf, we never really recovered from the last war. And-

Moon was cut off as a figure bowled into her squealing,
"Moooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!"

Struggling to rise with the figure firmly latched to her Moon gasped, "Tacky...hi, now...off, you'll damage...my wings."

Tacky got off, holding a hand for Moon, who graciously accepted. Wolf grinned ruefully, shaking his head. Tacky noticed him, "Wolfeh!" She went to charge him.

"Easy Lynn," his hand dipped to where he kept the Deck of Games are his belt, he pulled out her card, Fool of Tragedy. "It's good to see you though." He handed her the card.

She looked at it, and pouted, "You're too serious!"

"Aye." He began walking again. "So tell me, where's this group that sent Moon?"

"They're waiting at the Good Man's Inn."

"You knew we were arriving today?"

Tacky shook her head, hopping from what foot to the other, "Nope! But, we've taken turns waiting by the gate, and everyone meets at the Good Man's Inn from dawn till dusk everyday since Moon left."

Wolf gave her an appraising look.

Moon spoke up, "Everyone?"

Tacky mulled it over, "Well..."

Moon forestalled her, "Never mind Tacky. Wolf'll know when he gets there."

Walking through the streets Wolf noticed the disrepair of everything worsened as the continued into, if he recalled correctly, was the Lamwrigh Quarter, known for it's multi-hued lights that lined the streets, and glowed like rainbows after the sun had set. As he walked he noticed several lamps had been smashed, or we missing.

Shops were boarded up, and those that weren't the owners look fearful. Eventually the small party ended up in the mouth of an alley. Moon and Tacky proceeded him, they stopped half way down the alley outside a worn wooden door. Scrawled on a piece of scrap wood just over handing the door was, The Good Man's Inn.

Moon's eyes were a dusty gold, shining in the dimness of the looming buildings over head, and Tacky's face was slightly deranged. "After you!" they said in perfect unison. Wolf frowned, opening the door.

Nurvana
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This gets some snaps.

Can you draw? Because it'd be cool if you made a map.

wolf1991
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I can draw maps. I lack the ability to post them on the internet sadly.

TackyCrazyTNT
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Hey, look! It's me!
I am liking how this story is going so far, Wofleh.
Carry on! :b

MoonFairy
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Now I see why you asked me about that word, Wolf. xD
Well, I'm enjoying this so far. Would it be too hypocritical to tell you to hurry up with another update?

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Well I have enough characters to work with I suppose, but I'd still like a few more. Maybe two or three. SI VOUS PLAIT LURKERS!

I would, as this intrigues me, but mods are usually the choosers, not the beggars. Besides, I somehow doubt my dear character would fit the sitting very well.
That said, still lurking.

But interesting, easy read. You are doing well, and to judge by the responses here, it is quite popular as well.
wolf1991
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I would, as this intrigues me, but mods are usually the choosers, not the beggars. Besides, I somehow doubt my dear character would fit the sitting very well.
That said, still lurking.


lol having some superiority issues Cen?

And that's okay so long as you comment every now and then I am appeased. And I'm glad you're enjoying this.
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Wolf stepped into the dingy tavern, flanked by Moon and Tacky stepping close behind. The only patrons in the tavern were seated around a huddle of tables that had been moved to the center of the sagging room. Gagging on the stench of smoke-leaf and stale beer Wolf noticed an armed and cloaked figure watching him. The figure turned and said something to the others. They looked up.

Wolf noticed several faces even though time had changed them. Mav, the cloaked figure, Writer of House Art; a short woman with dark hair and olive skin, with features so plain one often had to take a second glance, Antigone, Queen of House Games; Jeol, close cropped light brownhair with grey streaks if grey running through it, general absent minded, white Rabbit of House Insanity; A heavy set man of middling height in a hideous leather coat that still had the hide on it jumped up, rattling the sack of alchemical munitions slung over his back, Ethan, the Mad Hatter of House Insanity; and finally, Orion, a hulk of a man with a large hammer slung across his back, Critic of House Art.

Pausing in the face of this group, Wolf reached for the Deck, placing a hand the pouch at his hip he stepped forward, Mav offered him a chair with a silent nod of greeting. The silence was unnerving, he began to fidget, glancing from one face to the other. Ethan was still standing, humming tunelessly to himself. Tacky and Moon seated themselves in two empty chairs. No one broke the silence.

Slowly, Wolf took his hand off the pouch, folding it over the stump of his left arm. A little tension seemed to leave the room. His eyes moved to Moon's, her shrug was almost unperceptible. He chewed his lip, cursing the gods in his mind he spoke, "You drag me out of isolation, across nearly a hundred leagues of forest and plain, almost three weeks of travel, and none of you have a Drape ****ed thing to say?"

Some looked amused, others indifferent, and Orion was hostile, "Cram it Wolf. You think that much of yourself do you? Think we just 'waited around' for the all important Wolf of the Cards to come and school us like children?"

Antigone spoke up, "Well, Orion, to be fair and realistic, he is the only one who can read that Deck without having his head slip open."

Orion snorted, "Yeah? And what about his superiority complex? Some good he was doing in his bloody tower."

Jeol, timid as a rabbit, "Well..."

"Well nothing! Don't sit there and defend him! Where was he when we had to rebuild? Gone for the hills. Nestled in some tower no one even knew existed!"

Moon's eys were filled with fire, "Drop it! We all agreed to get Wolf. But, Orion, you're right, Wolf ran when he could have helped, but that's then and this is now."

It was no good. The group disolved into bickering and petty arguments of the past. Me and my bloody mouth. He stood to leave, "To Drape with you all!"

A low voice cut through the noise, "Who's Drape?"

Wolf was taken aback. Looking for who spoke, his eyes fell on Mav again. The man nodded, pulling a quill pen and some parchment out from the ever present satchel at his side. "Well Wolf?"

Sighing he sat back down. He pulled out the Deck and tossed a card to every person seated, finally he placed his card face up in from of him. Everyone possessed their own cards as well. In the middle of the table he was at he placed three cards face down.

"I figure Nurvana," he flipped up the first card, it was the Mercenary, "and Cowmaster" a second card revealed King of Religion, "and this fellow, Death Hopper" the last card was turned, Waiter of House Silence, "all want their cards to keep. And that, is something we cannot permit."

"Why not?" Antigone said, looking a little skeptical.

"Because my dear Queen of Games, that would open The Road of Night."

"The what?" said Tacky.

"It's the place between worlds. According to legends a man can receive great power, and anything he wishes should he open it and somehow harness it. Of course that could destroy this reality...so no one's really tried it." someone said casually.

Wolf spun his head to the sound of the voice. Ethan grinned, Wolf gaped.

"So what do you propose Wolf?" Ethan said, still grinning

Wolf recollected his sense, "Nothing. You should have left me in my tower. Orion was right when he said I was no hero. You all no I'm no hero." He threw his card into the center of the table, removing the Deck for its pouch he placed that ton top of The King of House House Tragedy card.

He walked out the door.

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A heavy set man of middling height in a hideous leather coat that still had the hide on it jumped up, rattling the sack of alchemical munitions slung over his back, Ethan, the Mad Hatter of House Insanity

A quality introduction if there was ever such a thing to be heard of. Well done for the rest of it. Spot on, tally ho, work of art dear chap!

I like it, things seem to be picking up.
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lol having some superiority issues Cen?

Actually, I think it would be a inferiority complex badly disguised behind the normal practice of mods... But saying it's a superiority issue might make me look less pathetic.

As for the story:
Ah, is there anything better than a party of people who dislike each other, who still have to somehow work together to stop the possible end of the world/destruction of the world as we know it.
I can see many a good story from that.
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So I'm a villain. I never knew I had a dark side.

*Laughs evilly while thunder claps in the background*

As for the story. I find it great and is really a page turner (metaphorically speaking, of course). I did spot a few typos though. I'm puzzled if some of them were intentional or not. Like this one for example.

You all no I'm no hero.


Maybe you misspelled "know" to complement the other "no" next to "hero". Maybe you were writing late at night and misspelled it. I'll never no.
wolf1991
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So I'm a villain. I never knew I had a dark side.


If you've been following then you'll realize Nurvana has his own personal motives, but also his justifications are fairly reasonable. You see he isn't aware what could happen, but no one knows this. You'll also notice the two groups are not exactly perfect. I don't work with good and evil, only varrying shades of grey.

True, my character seems like the "hero" so to speak, but if you've paid attention you'll also notice that this character spent the past five or so years in absolute solitude while everyone else tried to rebuild their country from a past conflict. Also, again at the end you see my character leaving, once more running from problems.

Maybe you misspelled "know" to complement the other "no" next to "hero". Maybe you were writing late at night and misspelled it. I'll never no.


Yeah, I was tired as hell when I wrote this. AG needs an edit button.
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