Here are the results of this last contest. Format:Haiku Theme:Cats
Third Place - MagicTales I have a kitty Rainbows come out of its tail I called him Nyan
Even though you are third place you poem distinguishes itself from the others in that it makes no use of colloquialisms. Your strange but colorful use of one word imagery is very tasteful. Good job!
Second Place - Rocess Kitty The cat is little, Playing with a ball of yarn, It's cute and furry.
It has yellow eyes, It has gray fur and black paws, But the tail is white.
He can climb rocks, trees, He can catch squirrels, rabbit, mice, Can here prey from far.
He is muscular, He has good agility, And very smart
Despite the irregularity in your usage of pronouns and a few grammatical errors your haiku quadruple is well organized. It starts by enduring the reader to cats. Next, it describes what a cat might look like. Next, it tells what a cat can do. And lastly, it states a cat's strong points. Good job!
First Place - Schmiddy1234 Cats Cool little creatures Running, pouncing, gobbling. Furry lil' caress.
Congratulations on winning the contest. Your use of alliteration, assonance and consonance is very charming. Good job. Reward for first place: A Good Warm Feeling (Given by and ONLY by Murasaki9)
DRAT! Second! Schmid, I challenge you to a one-on-one poem on cats. Any cat poem, no specific category. You bit me from behind with the Haiku. (I'm not really mad xD And you don't have to join, I just thought it would be cool and I'm dying to get that poem out finally.)
The forest In the wield forest The lion is the king But a aint is the weakest You here birds sing You see the giraf the longest Wolves always think To kill all of his smallest On top of every tree You see flying animals They're lucky because they're free A elephant may falls On the count of three
There's more to talk about the forest ,but I've run out of ideas (Sorry)
