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Schmiddy1234
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Here you can post any type of poetry u want, just state what it is underneath.
I decided to do this because i like poetry A lot

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murasaki9
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Here are the results of this last contest.
Format:Haiku
Theme:Cats


Third Place - MagicTales
I have a kitty
Rainbows come out of its tail
I called him Nyan

Even though you are third place you poem distinguishes itself from the others in that it makes no use of colloquialisms. Your strange but colorful use of one word imagery is very tasteful. Good job!


Second Place - Rocess
Kitty
The cat is little,
Playing with a ball of yarn,
It's cute and furry.

It has yellow eyes,
It has gray fur and black paws,
But the tail is white.

He can climb rocks, trees,
He can catch squirrels, rabbit, mice,
Can here prey from far.

He is muscular,
He has good agility,
And very smart

Despite the irregularity in your usage of pronouns and a few grammatical errors your haiku quadruple is well organized. It starts by enduring the reader to cats. Next, it describes what a cat might look like. Next, it tells what a cat can do. And lastly, it states a cat's strong points. Good job!

First Place - Schmiddy1234
Cats
Cool little creatures
Running, pouncing, gobbling.
Furry lil' caress.

Congratulations on winning the contest. Your use of alliteration, assonance and consonance is very charming. Good job.
Reward for first place: A Good Warm Feeling (Given by and ONLY by Murasaki9)

MagicTales
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Thanks a lot for the comment and third place, murasaki!
And congrats on winning, schmid :P

Homework
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Hi Scmiddy its Homework. Oh and whit is the prize?

Schmiddy1234
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Hi Scmiddy its Homework. Oh and whit is the prize?


As of now the prize is a warm feeling from murasaki

Thanks a lot for the comment and third place, murasaki!
And congrats on winning, schmid :P


Thanks MagicTales! And congratz on getting third!
MetalHeart
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Ok this is weird
I thought the prize will be a merit !

Schmiddy1234
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Ok this is weird
I thought the prize will be a merit !


lol if more ppl come and we get more popular it WILL be one
Roccess
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DRAT! Second! Schmid, I challenge you to a one-on-one poem on cats. Any cat poem, no specific category. You bit me from behind with the Haiku.
(I'm not really mad xD And you don't have to join, I just thought it would be cool and I'm dying to get that poem out finally.)

murasaki9
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Thanks a lot for the comment and third place, murasaki!

You're welcome!

Ok this is weird
I thought the prize will be a merit !

Are you serious?? Absolutely not. I'm the judge.
Daizidawizard9000
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May I post my Haiku?

MetalHeart
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Are you serious??Absolutely not.I'm the judge.

Ooooops sorry
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The forest
In the wield forest
The lion is the king
But a aint is the weakest
You here birds sing
You see the giraf the longest
Wolves always think
To kill all of his smallest
On top of every tree
You see flying animals
They're lucky because they're free
A elephant may falls
On the count of three

There's more to talk about the forest ,but I've run out of ideas (Sorry)

murasaki9
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Ooooops sorry

That's okay. No worries. Didn't mean to be too hard on you. XD
Daizidawizard9000
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Entry (May I enter? If there is another competition, tell me or I'll look like a goof.)

SPAM

Spam, spam, everywhere
Tons of spam and no one cares
Why do people spam?

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Schmiddy1234's poetry corner

It's fun and it's cool
People love to make poems
Poems are awsome

Schmiddy1234
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Here is the guidelines for the next poetry contest!

Type: Doublet
About: Wolves

So right a doublet about wolves guys! And many ppl have wanted to join so yeah!

Submit ur entries by May 10th!

Thanx!
~Schmiddy

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