Wolves? Not many things rhyme with 'Wolves', but okay. Arctic Wolves
Look, in the snow, It's an Arctic Wolf you know. Don't see it, not abnormal, It's as white as your should be oral. The darkest it gets is grey, But eyes blue to black they say. In a white wonderland, They look insignificantly bland. It helps them escape their enemies, But it's the cold that keeps them away from fleas.
Oi. Sorry it was short I got stuck, and then decided whatever. And also sorry if I misused the word 'oral' in there, I just had to think of something white.
A bolt of energy, A breeze from the sea. A breath as dark as shadows, A home that everybody knows. A garden endless, A vow that a happy one said. A soldeir battle hardened, A metal worker that will mend. A wine that will make you dreary, A walker, never weary. A one happy as the sun, A hunter, a lonely one. One smart as clouds above, One who only believes in love.
Okay another poem on Olympia. Every line represents a God or Goddess, in no particular order. From the top, these are the ones written about:
Zeus, Lord of Skies Poseidon, Lord of Seas and Earthquakes Hades, Lord of the Underworld Hestia, Lady of Hearth Demeter, Lady of Harvest Hera, Lady of Marriage Ares, Lord of War Hephaestus, Lord of Fire Dionysus, Lord of Wine and Grapes, Hermes, Lord of Travellers Apollo, Lord of the Sun Artemis, Lady of the Hunt Athena, Lady of War and Wisdom Aphrodite, Lady of Love
Okay guys, that was a really lame turn out... only three entries o.O But as i always do, here they are Murasaki:
Jazmoon Howls by the wind Run, canter, slant gaze to fall, Fur glazed, swept by chilling call.
Roccess Arctic Wolves Look, in the snow, It's an Arctic Wolf you know. Don't see it, not abnormal, It's as white as you should be oral. The darkest it gets is grey, But eyes blue to black they say. In a white wonderland, They look insignificantly bland. It helps them escape their enemies, But it's the cold that keeps them away from fleas.
Schmiddy1234 Da wolves sneak For it is the prey peak. They hunt and defend But a message they must send, Is that we live east, and we are BEAST!
Here are the results of this contest Format: Doublets Theme: Wolves
Third Place - Roccess Arctic Wolves Look, in the snow, It's an Arctic Wolf you know. Don't see it, not abnormal, It's as white as you should be oral. The darkest it gets is grey, But eyes blue to black they say. In a white wonderland, They look insignificantly bland. It helps them escape their enemies, But it's the cold that keeps them away from fleas.
Not to steal your thunder or anything but this poem is somewhat colloquial. The construction is clumsy at times but the alliteration is beautiful. You make third place for your description, rhyming and alliteration. Keep trying!
Second Place - Schmiddy1234 Da wolves sneak For it is the prey peak. They hunt and defend But a message they must send, Is that we live east, and we are BEAST!
Second place for thee, Schmiddy, my friend. Your rhyming is perfect and your alliteration is a subtle touch to such a casual poem. You grab second place for this work of art that seems somewhat hurried. Good work!
First Place - Jazmoon Howls by the wind Run, canter, slant gaze to fall, Fur glazed, swept by chilling call.
Congratulations, Jazmoon!! You are the winner of this round. Your alliteration and assonance is cleverly integrated. I also noted a touch of consonance with the two words 'gaze' and 'glazed'. Your entry deserves first place for its fine wording and concision. Good work! Keep it up!
