Hmmm... the first one u wrote was a skeltonic verse And this one that u have written now... I don't think that follows any pattern but it seems like ur going like this: A-B-A-B-C... i'm not sure if there is any Its safe to call it a free verse poem
@ Mr Schmidds (That's my new nickname for you), It was 1st rhymes with 3rd, 2nd rhymes with 4th, and sometimes a fifth line that does not rhyme with anything. I wanted to write a Life and its problems poem that didn't suck for awhile, so here it is: So pitiful I once was a small boy called Little, I was happy but hungry so pitiful, So pitiful.
In my later yet earlier years I was weak one called Brittle, Though I did have unseen talents, so pitiful, So pitiful.
In my middle years I was strong and was called the Tophat, Though I didn't know why, so sad, So sad.
When I was older I was big and was called Fat, A humiliating name, so sad, So sad.
The few years before death I was smart and loyal, they called me the Constitution, Though even I had trouble understanding why, oh the confusion, The confusion.
After death they called me the Reunion, I always brought the family out of confusion, The confusion.
I really like some of your poems! I kinda want to start posting some of mine on here, but I need to start writing them more! xP I only have a couple that are good and I like free-verse and haiku's. I think I like your haiku's the most out of all of yours...
Theres no point in it(CAPTCHA) It just doesn't seem to work and have a good night (to murasaki)
Lol... CAPTCHA is also making me write haiu except filling them out before i post means losing a few seconds of my life i'll never get back Lol, when i write like to murasaki or something, i orginally wrote that poem in her haiku thread
