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Woah, I created a thread in the AMW. That's rare for me to do.
Anyways, this story is about ArmorGames as a highschool. So of course the users in ArmorGames will be students there(except knights, moderators, and admins who will be school staff). Anyways I'm going to make sure this story has tons of references. Heck, even the entire chapter could be a reference on it's own. Just know there will be references.
Alright criticism, I will allow criticism of all forms. Just as long as it doesn't insult me or anyone else. Just on the story.
If there's a question about the story that you'd like to ask I'll be happy to answer... probably... depending on what the question is about exactly.
Anyways here are the list of users that are characters so far:
Admins:
Ferret: School pet
DanMcNeely: Superintendent
Boppins: School repairman
Tasselfoot: Executive coach
Mods:
MrDayCee: Janitor, everyone hangs out with him and pets his beard.
Gantic: Principal
Moe: Politics teacher
Zophia: art teacher
Kega: Catalan language teacher, she loves to hang out in the art room
Frank: Science teacher he hangs out with groups of students because he can.
Strop: School Nurse, he is often seen doing ninja training
Reton: Literature teacher
Unleash: Math teacher
Walker: Gym teacher
Weird: Information tech
Knights:
Minotaur: A 23 year old looking 16 intellectual with a thing for alcohol. Likes to chase after young girls and is extremely sociable. He only got his bus license because he looked old enough.
Cen: Librarian that everyone likes but isn't seen much.
Nicho: The petulant history teacher.
Hectichermit: The hobo that sells natural drugs.
Xeano: The hall monitor that acts like he's cool. He's also really bad at his job.
Ernie: The one who serves lunch. Sometimes he serves bizarre foods that nobody has ever seen or heard of.
Asherlee: Weight room teacher and wrestling coach. She is Amazonian and 7 feet tall.
Calm: School counselor
Carlie: Swim teacher and coach
GoM: Football coach
Ivan: The punk kid on parole. He expresses his anger through drawings.
Knights that are not knights in the story yet.
R2: A robot that is constantly abused but still loves his abusers.
Patrick: The serious one who points out small details in a pinch
Users:
Clancy: foreign exchange student
arcticwolf: Clancy's twin who isn't as Canadian pro as Clancy
Riptizoid: 7 year old who is somehow in highschool. He dreams of his fantasy of marrying Lauren which will most likely never happen.
Mastaplaya: Football playa who loves to take selfies
Manly: extremely buff, but emotionally affected person
pang: Questionable gender person who is a twin to Sal
Sal: A guy who constantly lies to other students. He is pang's twin and is often seen talking about music.
Snag: A penguin that loves to play games.
Pick: Thief he's also the hawt one. No explanation needed.
Daleks: The one who tries to dropout but keeps coming back
Matt: The creative one who keeps making comics. The guy who comes to class, does the work and leaves early, talking to no one.
StormWalker: A violent female human who is mostly seen with poking people with needles of sharpness. She sometimes mutters about murder. Although once in awhile she goes over to a group of people.
Lauren: She is the girl that is there but is rarely ever noticed. She's also part vampire walrus.
Killersup: The one to talk like he's that voice guy in those one movie commercials. He also likes to talk in 3rd person.
Silver: The Irish guy whos main hobby is to hang around a group and annoy the members of that group. They like to hang around him anyways.
Nivlac: The one who tries to be funny but just causes awkward silence.
09philj: The antagonistic, sardonic, geek
Jack: A student who is an extreme peace-loving activist.
Nurv: An owl, that isn't very smart and likes to read children's books.
Aggs: The kawaii desu moshi moshi kid with the temper. She annoys her sister, Storm.
Omegap: the emotional kid that cries at everything, and is extremely clumsy
Dapro: The one kid that can be seen chucking everything out of the bus windows. Loves to throw stuff like a baseball pitch at anything that moves.
Pieguy: The smart one everyone cheats off of. He is just about every school activity there is, like football, chorus, art club, debate team, marching band, and even cheerleading.
minecraftsniper: A ball of hair that is annoying and loves to bite people.
superbobdabest: Captain of the football team and holder of all football knowledge.
danwar: The guy to stand up to bullies, he has a pretty hot temper.
DarkFire: The slacker who rarely speaks and when he does it's usually just insults.
niku: timetraveler who came to the past for the free donuts.
Darth: A shy, funny B student who is charming.
Frank_Frooton: A 25 year old goth who really needs to get out of school someday.
EvilSweetBlock: The kid who rarely goes to class, he also likes to hold people late for class.
Liquid: athletic geek, who hangs with other geeks like the band geeks, speed cubing geeks, and the others.
StormDragon: A shy, playful tomboy. Despite being a teacher's pet and a bookworm, she will get into a fight if needed. She also likes dragons, wolves, anime, comics, and prefers fiction over nonfiction.
Zirco: A cute girl that loves learning, bad jokes, and punk rock.
apldeap: A laid-back Flipino kid who cracks jokes and is very violent. He likes to think of himself as a smart person. He also is seen with burgers and soda, though nobody knows where he gets them.
Eliakith: He knows everyone and everyone knows him but his aura puts him off. He finishes his work earlier than everyone and is mostly seen playing D&D. He will never join a sport.
Blk: Smart guy slacker who's always arguing and constantly getting into trouble. Reads all the time and is pretty good at the saxophone which he plays in band.
Isigna: The hotheaded transexual kid who'd rather be called a guy. Sings along to sing-alongs, multitasks, and stands up to bullies.
Balloon_Girl: Happy-go-lucky child who's best friend is a balloon she brings everywhere with her. Mess with her balloon, you mess with her.
Gandalf: The kid who's life is all LARP. He watches waaay too much LotR.
Gamerguy: The guy who dares to play his Gameboy in class. He's mostly seen talking of DotD.
KGFM: The creepy girl that hangs out in the science lab and creates weapons, the big kind, and bots that invade blood cells. She is never shy around strangers and is on sugar, explaining why she has a cookie in her pocket at all times.
Moon: The apathetic cool kid. She constantly skips class and is mostly seen being suspended.
Guest_Pegasus: A kind freshman girl who is loved by most people. However, she is very gullible and struggles through depression.
Saphire: The girl that seemingly has everything in her bag, who also loves animals to the extreme.
Trigon: The 27 year old tourist from Indonesia who ended up at the wrong place, but saw his opportunity to become a teacher and is now trying his best to become one.
DoomBreed: The creepy arsonist who dreams of setting everything on fire! People only hang out with him because he does their homework.
Legendary: The positive guy who is legendary.
Armorplayer: A shadow of a kid who stalks students to find worthy opponents. Sometimes he sits alone and counts all the way to 100.
Gogotank: A friendly penguin who keeps hugging random people at school for some reason. He sometimes takes out his mp4 player and listens to music nobody has heard of.
Red: A guy with a low self-esteem who most people avoid. Dreams of painting the entire school and students red. Can occasionally be heard whispering "Pirate Parties".
FishPreferred: A pedantic and skeptical scholarly type with almost no emotional investment in anything whatsoever. Often reading books about logic and physics, some of which may be course related, and correcting statements made by complete strangers. Considers the truth more important than preserving the feelings/cherished beliefs of others. Does not consider anyone a close friend. Polite, but often condescending. Socially awkward, but fine with that.
devanash: A guy who has some slight problems. He is always gossiped by other people, and often portrayed as a flirty hyperactive kid. He tries to be his best to other people, and hates being scolded for a thing he didnt do. Has a slight sense of humor, and hates guys with ego.
If you would like to be added, please tell me the personality your character would have.
In order to be added as a character, you must have at least 1,000 posts or be known throughout the Community. This is to stop users with like 1 post to come in, asking to be a character, and then never show up again.
The rate I'll be posting each chapter will(hopefully) be 2 weeks a month. So expect lots of chapters coming.
Chapters:
Chapter 0: Before the Beginning
Chapter 1: The New Kid
Chapter 2: Poor Lauren
Chapter 3: Matt's Reign of Terror
Chapter 4: The New Chapter
Chapter 5: Nurse's Dojo
Chapter 6: Catch that Ferret!
Chapter 7: Dang it Clancy!
Chapter 8: Is That Daleks?
Chapter 9: Road Trip
Chapter 10: Storm's Daydream Part 1
Chapter 11: Please Don't AP
Chapter 12: Clancy's Canadian Cooking
Chapter 13: Bomb Threat
Chapter 14: Dodgeball
Chapter 15: Wrath of the Forum Games
Chapter 16: The King's Throne
Chapter 17: New Security
Current editors: @StormWalker, @Clancy12, and @09philj
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Can I be a happy go lucky successful and legendary kind of guy?
@R2D21999 After I've finished all the chapters time to give you some constructive criticism.
Also ***SPOILERS*** to everyone who hasn't read the story yet.
-Don't distance yourself as a narrator from the story. Do not use phrases like "So to recap (repeat what is happening)" and other similar sentences, as it cuts the action short.
-The Pterodactyl King was a bit off. Not blending in to the story well. A knight or a mod in some other place or a different user (for example the scheming Matt) could have fulfilled the same role.
-Chapter 11 was a bit lacking. Darkfire, at first obviously doesn't want to be seen buying AP, but then the next day, he shows everyone that he smokes illegal cigaretes. Also, you don't show us his experience from the visits to Calm
-Some characters need to show more of their personality in the story. R2 doesn't get bullied, Jack is not so peaceful, Darkfire doesn't insult people that much etc.
-Also, how is Hectichermit able to walk freely in the school (he sees Blk's flyers)?
-I like how the first few chapters are chronologically taking place at the same time. Characters talking in one chapter act accordingly what is happening to the other. It would be nice if you could continue it.
Just my ideas on improving this. It is still very good. Congratulations again!
-The Pterodactyl King was a bit off.
That was all @StormWalker. I had no part in Chapter 10 except for the beginning. But thanks.
Also, you don't show us his experience from the visits to Calm
That is planning to be a chapter all on it's own. After all, it was a week later before DarkFire stopped smoking.
-Some characters need to show more of their personality in the story.
Kk, I'll keep that in mind next time.
-Also, how is Hectichermit able to walk freely in the school (he sees Blk's flyers)?
Sometimes @MrDayCee forgets to lockup when he's done.
Can we get a sample of what the next few chapters involve?
I'll give you the title and that's it. Chapter 13: Bomb Threat
Sometimes @MrDayCee forgets to lockup when he's done.
That's because I trust all of you...
That... and the fact that I have traps set during the night...
-The Pterodactyl King was a bit off.
That's the thing, though. The Pterodactyl King is a real person. As in, I know someone at my school (not AGH, my actually, very-real, very-irritating school) who I mentioned this story to once, and he said he wanted to be included. So there he is. He's not actually a king of pterodactyls, though, he's just the only redhead in Chinese III.
Chapter 13: Bomb Threat
I'm scared now
The creepy thing is, last year, at my school, there was an email sent to my school saying that someone was going to bomb the school (with a date they planned to do it) I stayed home that day, and the people that went said that there were cops checking backpacks and personal belongings, a letter was sent the previous day saying that it was recommended that there would be no backpacks at school and that students were not required to show up that day, I stayed home, I was petrified, luckily nothing happened, but I thought I was going to die
This is part of the reason why I'm homeschooled btw
Anyway, hopefully nobody dies
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