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Woah, I created a thread in the AMW. That's rare for me to do.
Anyways, this story is about ArmorGames as a highschool. So of course the users in ArmorGames will be students there(except knights, moderators, and admins who will be school staff). Anyways I'm going to make sure this story has tons of references. Heck, even the entire chapter could be a reference on it's own. Just know there will be references.
Alright criticism, I will allow criticism of all forms. Just as long as it doesn't insult me or anyone else. Just on the story.
If there's a question about the story that you'd like to ask I'll be happy to answer... probably... depending on what the question is about exactly.
Anyways here are the list of users that are characters so far:
Admins:
Ferret: School pet
DanMcNeely: Superintendent
Boppins: School repairman
Tasselfoot: Executive coach
Mods:
MrDayCee: Janitor, everyone hangs out with him and pets his beard.
Gantic: Principal
Moe: Politics teacher
Zophia: art teacher
Kega: Catalan language teacher, she loves to hang out in the art room
Frank: Science teacher he hangs out with groups of students because he can.
Strop: School Nurse, he is often seen doing ninja training
Reton: Literature teacher
Unleash: Math teacher
Walker: Gym teacher
Weird: Information tech
Knights:
Minotaur: A 23 year old looking 16 intellectual with a thing for alcohol. Likes to chase after young girls and is extremely sociable. He only got his bus license because he looked old enough.
Cen: Librarian that everyone likes but isn't seen much.
Nicho: The petulant history teacher.
Hectichermit: The hobo that sells natural drugs.
Xeano: The hall monitor that acts like he's cool. He's also really bad at his job.
Ernie: The one who serves lunch. Sometimes he serves bizarre foods that nobody has ever seen or heard of.
Asherlee: Weight room teacher and wrestling coach. She is Amazonian and 7 feet tall.
Calm: School counselor
Carlie: Swim teacher and coach
GoM: Football coach
Ivan: The punk kid on parole. He expresses his anger through drawings.
Knights that are not knights in the story yet.
R2: A robot that is constantly abused but still loves his abusers.
Patrick: The serious one who points out small details in a pinch
Users:
Clancy: foreign exchange student
arcticwolf: Clancy's twin who isn't as Canadian pro as Clancy
Riptizoid: 7 year old who is somehow in highschool. He dreams of his fantasy of marrying Lauren which will most likely never happen.
Mastaplaya: Football playa who loves to take selfies
Manly: extremely buff, but emotionally affected person
pang: Questionable gender person who is a twin to Sal
Sal: A guy who constantly lies to other students. He is pang's twin and is often seen talking about music.
Snag: A penguin that loves to play games.
Pick: Thief he's also the hawt one. No explanation needed.
Daleks: The one who tries to dropout but keeps coming back
Matt: The creative one who keeps making comics. The guy who comes to class, does the work and leaves early, talking to no one.
StormWalker: A violent female human who is mostly seen with poking people with needles of sharpness. She sometimes mutters about murder. Although once in awhile she goes over to a group of people.
Lauren: She is the girl that is there but is rarely ever noticed. She's also part vampire walrus.
Killersup: The one to talk like he's that voice guy in those one movie commercials. He also likes to talk in 3rd person.
Silver: The Irish guy whos main hobby is to hang around a group and annoy the members of that group. They like to hang around him anyways.
Nivlac: The one who tries to be funny but just causes awkward silence.
09philj: The antagonistic, sardonic, geek
Jack: A student who is an extreme peace-loving activist.
Nurv: An owl, that isn't very smart and likes to read children's books.
Aggs: The kawaii desu moshi moshi kid with the temper. She annoys her sister, Storm.
Omegap: the emotional kid that cries at everything, and is extremely clumsy
Dapro: The one kid that can be seen chucking everything out of the bus windows. Loves to throw stuff like a baseball pitch at anything that moves.
Pieguy: The smart one everyone cheats off of. He is just about every school activity there is, like football, chorus, art club, debate team, marching band, and even cheerleading.
minecraftsniper: A ball of hair that is annoying and loves to bite people.
superbobdabest: Captain of the football team and holder of all football knowledge.
danwar: The guy to stand up to bullies, he has a pretty hot temper.
DarkFire: The slacker who rarely speaks and when he does it's usually just insults.
niku: timetraveler who came to the past for the free donuts.
Darth: A shy, funny B student who is charming.
Frank_Frooton: A 25 year old goth who really needs to get out of school someday.
EvilSweetBlock: The kid who rarely goes to class, he also likes to hold people late for class.
Liquid: athletic geek, who hangs with other geeks like the band geeks, speed cubing geeks, and the others.
StormDragon: A shy, playful tomboy. Despite being a teacher's pet and a bookworm, she will get into a fight if needed. She also likes dragons, wolves, anime, comics, and prefers fiction over nonfiction.
Zirco: A cute girl that loves learning, bad jokes, and punk rock.
apldeap: A laid-back Flipino kid who cracks jokes and is very violent. He likes to think of himself as a smart person. He also is seen with burgers and soda, though nobody knows where he gets them.
Eliakith: He knows everyone and everyone knows him but his aura puts him off. He finishes his work earlier than everyone and is mostly seen playing D&D. He will never join a sport.
Blk: Smart guy slacker who's always arguing and constantly getting into trouble. Reads all the time and is pretty good at the saxophone which he plays in band.
Isigna: The hotheaded transexual kid who'd rather be called a guy. Sings along to sing-alongs, multitasks, and stands up to bullies.
Balloon_Girl: Happy-go-lucky child who's best friend is a balloon she brings everywhere with her. Mess with her balloon, you mess with her.
Gandalf: The kid who's life is all LARP. He watches waaay too much LotR.
Gamerguy: The guy who dares to play his Gameboy in class. He's mostly seen talking of DotD.
KGFM: The creepy girl that hangs out in the science lab and creates weapons, the big kind, and bots that invade blood cells. She is never shy around strangers and is on sugar, explaining why she has a cookie in her pocket at all times.
Moon: The apathetic cool kid. She constantly skips class and is mostly seen being suspended.
Guest_Pegasus: A kind freshman girl who is loved by most people. However, she is very gullible and struggles through depression.
Saphire: The girl that seemingly has everything in her bag, who also loves animals to the extreme.
Trigon: The 27 year old tourist from Indonesia who ended up at the wrong place, but saw his opportunity to become a teacher and is now trying his best to become one.
DoomBreed: The creepy arsonist who dreams of setting everything on fire! People only hang out with him because he does their homework.
Legendary: The positive guy who is legendary.
Armorplayer: A shadow of a kid who stalks students to find worthy opponents. Sometimes he sits alone and counts all the way to 100.
Gogotank: A friendly penguin who keeps hugging random people at school for some reason. He sometimes takes out his mp4 player and listens to music nobody has heard of.
Red: A guy with a low self-esteem who most people avoid. Dreams of painting the entire school and students red. Can occasionally be heard whispering "Pirate Parties".
FishPreferred: A pedantic and skeptical scholarly type with almost no emotional investment in anything whatsoever. Often reading books about logic and physics, some of which may be course related, and correcting statements made by complete strangers. Considers the truth more important than preserving the feelings/cherished beliefs of others. Does not consider anyone a close friend. Polite, but often condescending. Socially awkward, but fine with that.
devanash: A guy who has some slight problems. He is always gossiped by other people, and often portrayed as a flirty hyperactive kid. He tries to be his best to other people, and hates being scolded for a thing he didnt do. Has a slight sense of humor, and hates guys with ego.
If you would like to be added, please tell me the personality your character would have.
In order to be added as a character, you must have at least 1,000 posts or be known throughout the Community. This is to stop users with like 1 post to come in, asking to be a character, and then never show up again.
The rate I'll be posting each chapter will(hopefully) be 2 weeks a month. So expect lots of chapters coming.
Chapters:
Chapter 0: Before the Beginning
Chapter 1: The New Kid
Chapter 2: Poor Lauren
Chapter 3: Matt's Reign of Terror
Chapter 4: The New Chapter
Chapter 5: Nurse's Dojo
Chapter 6: Catch that Ferret!
Chapter 7: Dang it Clancy!
Chapter 8: Is That Daleks?
Chapter 9: Road Trip
Chapter 10: Storm's Daydream Part 1
Chapter 11: Please Don't AP
Chapter 12: Clancy's Canadian Cooking
Chapter 13: Bomb Threat
Chapter 14: Dodgeball
Chapter 15: Wrath of the Forum Games
Chapter 16: The King's Throne
Chapter 17: New Security
Current editors: @StormWalker, @Clancy12, and @09philj
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[/quote]That's PieGuy, I didn't even add you yet. Unless you have personality in mind. [quote]
Ok, to clarify. I posted that when I was logged in as me. I have no idea what happened there. I'll talk to DayCee about it. Just to Clarify that.
Chapter 3: Matt's Reign of Terror
Frank stands in front of a normal-sized classroom. Almost all the desks are filled with students. Only desk 7 remains empty. Frank is in the middle of doing roll call.
"Clancy."
"Here."
"Patrick."
"Present."
"Snag."
"Here."
"Lauren."
There's no answer.
"Lauren," Frank repeats, then looks up. "What happened to Lauren? She'd never miss the first day of school on purpose." He starts to make a note to himself on his clipboard about Lauren being missing when his phone rings. Shooting the assembled students an abashed glance, he takes a few into the hallway, out of earshot.
"Hello?... Pick, I'm in the middle of class... I'm trying to do roll call here... Alright, fine, I'll be right over." Frank hangs up, steps back in, then points at a student in the front row.
"You, Matt, was it? You're in charge while I'm gone."
Matt sits there dumbfounded while Frank leaves the room and quickly gets to the front of the building.
"Alright, maggots!" shouts Matt a few seconds later. "Frank has allowed me to be in charge and before we do what I have planned, let me set some ground rules..."
"Whoa, whoa, whoa," says Storm, whoâs seated in the front row. "Who said you could make your own rules?"
"Hold on a minute, Storm," says Patrick. "Let's see what he has to say first before judging him."
"Thank you, Patrick," says Matt with a pleased smile. "Anyways, Rule #1: You cannot talk about the superintendent."
"You mean DanielMcNeely?" asks Killersup. "Why is Killersup not allowed to talk about- ow!" Killersup is suddenly interrupted as a ruler hits his fingers. The hand holding the ruler belonged to Matt.
"I said, 'You cannot talk about the Superintendent.'"
Storm stands up and yells, "You can't tell me what to do! I demand we murder Matt!" She pulls a large needle from her pocket.
Matt smiles nervously. "Storm, you can be the queen."
Storms face brightens at the thought. "What do I have to do?"
"All you have to do is sit in your desk."
Storm scowls with disappointment as she sits at her desk.
Matt continues. "Anyways, Rule #2: You CANNNOT talk about the superintendent."
Patrick frowns at the rule. "Why did you make the same rule twice?"
"So people can understand how important it is." Matt says, as if it's completely obvious.
"But why did you-"
Matt interrupts. "Rule #3: There are 4 types of staff. Admins, moderators, knights, and you."
Clancy raises his hand, "What do admins, moderators, and knights have to do with anything?"
"Well duh, I'm talking about the teachers and the different levels they have in their schooling career," says Matt.
"There are different levels to teachers?"
Matt ignores Clancy. "Rule #4: You will never become a teacher."
"Actually," says Patrick. "You just need to get to college and get a degree in teaching."
Matt smacks the ruler on Patrick's fingers.
"Rule #5: If you're new, R2 will give you cookies with possible health consequences."
Everyone looks at Snag, who sits there with a pale face.
"Wait a minute," says Storm. "R2 isn't even in this class, why does the rule concern him?"
"Because of cookies, queen Storm," says Matt, bowing. "Rule #6: Ferret is actually a ferret."
"Well duh," says Killersup. "He's the school's animal mascot. Killersup even fed him glass to make his bones strong."
Everyone stares at him.
"What?" asks Killersup.
"Killersup..." Patrick sighs. "Milk is what makes bones strong, not glass."
"Ohhhh... someone should probably call a vet."
"Not important right now," says Matt, annoyed with the interruptions. "Rule #6: If you say something worse than pangtongshu, you deserve a detention."
"That isn't fair!" screams Killersup. "So pang can talk about the female body but Killersup can't?! Killersupâs going to take a bathroom break to release his anger!" Killersup quickly runs out of the classroom.
"Rule #7: There are no girls at school."
Patrick raises an eyebrow, "What about Storm, Lauren, Kega, and Zoph?"
"Stormwalker is a femalloid," says Matt. "The other 3 are questionable."
"But they're obviously fe-"
"Rule #8: Everything can be found in pang's bed."
Killersup chose that time to come back. "Can Killersup have the directions to pang's house?"
âHow do you know? Does that mean youâve been in pangâs bed?â Snag piped up.
"Rule #9: Being friended is not very important," says Matt, ignoring both questions.
"You mean being friends with Clancy has no true purpose?" asks Storm.
"That's right."
Storm looks at Clancy, who looks as if he's going to cry. "We're no longer friends."
Clancy gets up. "I'm... going to go to the bathroom." Clancy leaves, and everyone hears him wailing loudly, though the sound diminishes as he runs away.
"Rule #10: tl;dr."
Patrick frowns once again. "What does that even mea-"
"Ok people, let's get started," says Matt, clapping his hands enthusiastically. "I want all of you to give me as many pushups as you can while sitting on top of each other."
"Killersup isn't doing that," says Killersup. "This is anarchy."
"I agree with Killersup," says Patrick. "Frank only told you to watch the class, not to rule us like an evil sultan."
The other students in the classroom who tend to be quieter all shout in unison. "Yeah!"
Matt just stands there with uncaring eyes. "I thought this might happen." He brings out a remote with a single button on it. "...Which is why I installed this."
He presses the button and all the students, with the exception of Storm, get a nasty shock.
"When did you have time to install this?" gasps Patrick. "And why didn't Storm get shocked?"
"I have lots of free time, Patrick," Matt brags. "And Storm didn't get shocked because she's queen."
Storm sticks her tongue out at Patrick.
"Now c'mon. Do pushups on top of each other. New people on the bottom."
It takes them a while, but they all manage to get into some form that Matt finds acceptable. Snag is at the bottom, while Patrick is at the top. The room isnât that tall, so every time they do a pushup, Patrick goes through the ceiling tiles.
Matt claps and laughs. "Excellent! Do that for 20 minutes."
Clancy walks in the classroom, blowing his nose on a tissue. The tissue falls to the ground as he takes in his surroundings.
"Clancy, I want you to peel grapes and feed them to me!" orders Matt.
"I'm not going to do that," Clancy replies indignantly.
Matt gives Storm the remote. "Would you like to do the honors?"
Storm happily grabs the remote and presses it non-stop while Clancy and everyone else is getting electrical shocks. When Matt takes it from her, she pouts.
"That's enough for now. Save the batteries," says Matt.
So to recap, everyoneâs doing pushups on top of each other while Clancyâs feeding Matt peeled grapes and Stormâs reading an exciting book at her desk. This was still the case when Frank rushed into the room, Lauren in tow.
"What is going on here?!" shouts Frank, looking at Matt. That's when Storm breaks down in tears, the exciting book safely stowed under her desk.
"Matt forced everyone to do pushups on top of each other, and made stupid rules... and he said that if I didn't watch... he'd hit me," sobs Storm, her hand in a fist over her arm.
Matt stares at Storm, his mouth agape. Frank glares at Matt.
"We're going to take a little trip to principal Gantic's office."
Frank leads Matt to the door. When Matt looks back at Storm, sheâs no longer crying, and instead has a mischievous smile on her face as she offers him a cheery wave. She removes her fist from her arm, revealing the needle that sheâd stabbed herself with to bring out the tears. Matt glared.
"You treacherous little..." The door is closed before he can say anything further, and in a collective sigh, the stack of people doing pushups collapses like a landslide, overturning several desks. Storm prods Snagâs head with her foot.
Lauren stands there awkwardly. "So... what did I miss?"
Editor: @Stormwalker
Oh gosh... That was hilarious... Poor Matt. He got what he deserved though.
By the way, how many classes are there in total?
There are 7 periods and 7 classes... now that you mention it I feel like there should be more.
Error: Rule 6 was used twice.
Rule #6: Ferret is actually a ferret.
Rule #6: If you say something worse than pangtongshu, you deserve a detention.
There are 7 periods and 7 classes... now that you mention it I feel like there should be more.
You could do what my school does and have "7" periods. Which is 1, 2, 3, 4, 5a, 5b, 6, and 7. 5a and 5b are lunch. But there's not that many people in the AG high so I don't think it'll work. Just having it be 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7 would be okay. There are clubs and things to consider, too.
Error: Rule 6 was used twice.
*double take* Really? Curses. R2, I've failed you as an editor :P
How much time will this story cover? Like will it be just a day or more?
Rule 6 was used twice.
Really? Curses. R2, I've failed you as an editor :P
Actually before there used to two 5s. I changed it to 6 and forgot to check if there was another 6.
How much time will this story cover? Like will it be just a day or more?
For now, since it's the first day of school, it'll take about 1 class period. But in the future some might take a day.
I will correct the numbers for you @R2D21999, but then there will be 11 rules of course... is that ok with you? =)
And I have a question for my character... could you have me drive a Harley to work please? =P
Also, if you want to, you can use my short story from my janitor experience I posted in an older thread! I used some different users, but it can be altered easily...
is that ok with you? =)
Fine with me.
could you have me drive a Harley to work please?
That's the motorcycle, right?
Also, if you want to, you can use my short story from my janitor experience I posted in an older thread
Yeah, I've been planning to do that for awhile.
That seemed to be an incredibly accurate portrayal of Matt. Well done, though it may have gone to his head a little bit......
~Manly
Depends who's calling the shots at that moment in time @MattEmAngel... for all you know, Frank's on vacation and I am teaching my art class at that very spot?! =P
That chapter seemed awfully short...
Really? It was longer by a few words from the last chapter and was 200 words longer than the first, and quiet frankly it's the longest one I have so far, even to the ones already finished that aren't shown.
Quite frankly, I'm not going to make them extremely long, my minimum is 1000 words.
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