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Posted Aug 24, '09 at 2:34am

Zega
6,512 posts
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Whoa, never done this before.
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The pond is a pond.
No ordinary old pond.
It is just a pond.
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Posted Aug 24, '09 at 6:54pm

Maverick4
3,355 posts
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There pretty good so far, and Bronze yours is just plain scary. And Zega, your middle line only has 6 sylables instead of 7.
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Posted Aug 24, '09 at 7:06pm

Bronze
2,193 posts
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There pretty good so far, and Bronze yours is just plain scary. And Zega, your middle line only has 6 sylables instead of 7.
Well, my mind works like that sometime...and to help out Zega, I think it matters how you pronounce ordinary, I do it like or-din-air-ee, but I think some people do it like ord-nair-ee.
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Posted Aug 25, '09 at 1:47pm

shayneii
2,419 posts
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Splish, a fish jumps... joy
Bursting, colourful delight
The sound goes, "Gah-ploonk".
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Posted Aug 25, '09 at 1:49pm

Ernie15
11,225 posts
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The pond is a pond
It's just a big stupid pond
Who cares, anyway?
I just know I'll be an honorable mention. xD
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Posted Aug 25, '09 at 1:59pm

fluffybunny422
415 posts
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yes. finally i get to have a contest i can join.
I lean over the pond.
Just look at the colors.
Oh so beauti- *splash*
:3
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Posted Aug 25, '09 at 2:00pm

Zega
6,512 posts
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Maverick, just like bronze said... "Well, my mind works like that sometime...and to help out Zega, I think it matters how you pronounce ordinary, I do it like or-din-air-ee, but I think some people do it like ord-nair-ee." can it still be an entry? D:
@ Ernie, you copied mine!
My entry on page 1:
The pond is a pond.
No ordinary old pond.
It is just a pond.
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Posted Aug 25, '09 at 2:31pm

Ernie15
11,225 posts
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@ Ernie, you copied mine!
I didn't even read that page! I'll make a new one.
This is cursed bad pond.
My friend Ziggy drowned in there.
His body remains.
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Posted Aug 25, '09 at 2:32pm

Ernie15
11,225 posts
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This is cursed bad pond.
Sorry, that line should say "This is one cursed pond".
Other than that mistake, that is my entry.
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Posted Aug 25, '09 at 2:45pm

tennisman24
4,738 posts
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Are there merits rewarded for the winner?
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