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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Aug 24, '09 at 2:34am

Zega

Zega

7,244 posts

Whoa, never done this before.

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The pond is a pond.
No ordinary old pond.
It is just a pond.

 

Posted Aug 24, '09 at 6:54pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,889 posts

There pretty good so far, and Bronze yours is just plain scary. And Zega, your middle line only has 6 sylables instead of 7.

 

Posted Aug 24, '09 at 7:06pm

Bronze

Bronze

2,454 posts

There pretty good so far, and Bronze yours is just plain scary. And Zega, your middle line only has 6 sylables instead of 7.


Well, my mind works like that sometime...and to help out Zega, I think it matters how you pronounce ordinary, I do it like or-din-air-ee, but I think some people do it like ord-nair-ee.
 

Posted Aug 25, '09 at 1:47pm

shayneii

shayneii

2,688 posts

Splish, a fish jumps... joy
Bursting, colourful delight
The sound goes, "Gah-ploonk".

 

Posted Aug 25, '09 at 1:49pm

Ernie15

Ernie15

13,583 posts

Knight

The pond is a pond
It's just a big stupid pond
Who cares, anyway?

I just know I'll be an honorable mention. xD

 

Posted Aug 25, '09 at 1:59pm

fluffybunny422

fluffybunny422

1,237 posts

yes. finally i get to have a contest i can join.

I lean over the pond.
Just look at the colors.
Oh so beauti- *splash*

:3

 

Posted Aug 25, '09 at 2:00pm

Zega

Zega

7,244 posts

Maverick, just like bronze said... "Well, my mind works like that sometime...and to help out Zega, I think it matters how you pronounce ordinary, I do it like or-din-air-ee, but I think some people do it like ord-nair-ee." can it still be an entry? D:

@ Ernie, you copied mine!
My entry on page 1:

The pond is a pond.
No ordinary old pond.
It is just a pond.
 

Posted Aug 25, '09 at 2:31pm

Ernie15

Ernie15

13,583 posts

Knight

@ Ernie, you copied mine!


I didn't even read that page! I'll make a new one.

This is cursed bad pond.
My friend Ziggy drowned in there.
His body remains.
 

Posted Aug 25, '09 at 2:32pm

Ernie15

Ernie15

13,583 posts

Knight

This is cursed bad pond.


Sorry, that line should say "This is one cursed pond".

Other than that mistake, that is my entry.
 

Posted Aug 25, '09 at 2:45pm

tennisman24

tennisman24

4,867 posts

Are there merits rewarded for the winner?