ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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sourwhatup2
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Poison fruit Yh xD

dudeguy45
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A haven in hell
green moss creeping up soft bark
Succulent fruit



I like the first line best.

parrot657
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There outside the house
Is a fruit tree on the yard
With lotsa mangos...

lol. will modify the last line later :P.

Pois0nArr0w
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Dudeguy, your last line needs another syllable.

jdoggparty
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I picked an apple
Inside was a big surprise
The worm kicked my face

lol. My first Haiku

dudeguy45
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A haven in hell
green moss creeping up soft bark
Succulent fruit shines


Edited.

Moabarmorgamer
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Beautiful orchard
Clusters of my apple trees
Leaves red, gold, and brown

the_manta
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Life giver to all,
a wise elder among us,
Plentiful and kind

First Haiku. Hope it's good.

parrot657
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I picked an apple
Inside was a big surprise
The worm kicked my face

lol, this one is great.
fluffybunny422
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Awww my didn't haiku didn't get judged :3

fluffybunny422
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Sry I forgot my haiku,


The fruit-filled branches,
Holding me from my demise,
I check the branch, snap.

Owen135731
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Total randomness

The fruit tree grows fruit,
But what is that in the ground?
Oh, its a carrot


Like it?

Maverick4
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Owen, that was so random.

Fluffy, I'm glad you entered again. Your last haiku was great, but it didnt meet the sylabul requirements, so you got DQ'd. Or you would have placed m8.

yielee
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Triple Pond Play

(5)Ponds with tadpoles are (7)really interestingly (5)wonderful places
(5)where children can learn (7)about life's development (5)outside the classroom. (5)Show your kids a pond (7)where tadpoles swim all day long (5)before they grow up.

Bronze
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Umm, yeilee, your structure confuses me and we are already past ponds :/

Don't know what else to say.

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