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Posted Jul 1, '10 at 10:25pm

jeol

jeol

3,987 posts

The cat purrs softly
It's owner's hand stroking her fur
The cat slowly concurs
That sleep is best in warmth

Next..

The wind blew harshly in the cold

 

Posted Jul 1, '10 at 10:30pm

slayguy8

slayguy8

729 posts

The wind blew harshly in the cold
The snow reflects the light
The snow owl swoops
It got its prey

Ok

The night was restless

 

Posted Jul 2, '10 at 1:30am

Parsat

Parsat

2,223 posts

The night was restless,
Deep and dark:
These are the signs
Of evil arts.

I know not what lurks in the deep
Or what foul beings seem to creep
In mud that seems mixed thick with blood
And bubbles shiny, soapy suds.

Next line:
He shot me, and my dreams were shattered glass...

 

Posted Jul 2, '10 at 1:34am

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,417 posts

He shot me, and my dreams were shattered glass...
Who know why he did this?
I cannot see if this pain will pass.
Ruining my perfect balance of bliss.

Probably ninja'd.XD

Sitting on my little boat.

 

Posted Jul 2, '10 at 1:39am

pHacon

pHacon

1,941 posts

He shot me, and my dreams were shattered glass
What meaning they had has been lost, alas
What shall I be, I do not know
All I hope is that my good will show

Right off the top of my head.
aww crap almost ninjad... gonna leave that there cuz I liked it a bit.

Sitting on my little boat.
Rowing rowing across this moat
Casting my net, all souls today,
Will be captured in time, and lay at bay.

The night is bright, the moon is afire ...

Hoping against a ninja here.

 

Posted Jul 2, '10 at 1:43am

Kyouzou

Kyouzou

5,231 posts

The night is bright, the moon is afire
A beam of light shines down upon the shire
A shadow here, a light there
The mysterious night reaches out to all here

There you are, hopefully it's not terrible

As spring arrived

 

Posted Jul 2, '10 at 1:48am

thisisnotanalt

thisisnotanalt

10,092 posts

hoping against a ninja here,
my motives and chances still unclear.
will I survive, and live in calm?
or be crushed by my fate as a ticking time bomb?

hoping against a ninja here,
it's coming down to my worst fear.
grab for the problem, try and try
but when you lose, don't sit and cry.

~~~~~~

"The tile reflected what I knew"

 

Posted Jul 2, '10 at 1:49am

thisisnotanalt

thisisnotanalt

10,092 posts

That's what I get for leaving this tab alone for five minutes, crap . . . .

 

Posted Jul 2, '10 at 1:50am

pHacon

pHacon

1,941 posts

uhh... alt, sorry but my last line was above that one, I should have marked it better.

 

Posted Jul 2, '10 at 1:51am

thisisnotanalt

thisisnotanalt

10,092 posts

I thought it looked a little funny, lol . . . .

Oh well, it was tougher to write than the line you intended for us to use >_>

 
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