digest or newsletter of sorts of the best lines and poems in every 10 pages (100 posts),
I was actually going to suggest just such a thing...
Question:
May we add punctuation to the first line?
For instance, could I write "What element do I find, my Desire?"
This changes the meaning from asking which element you desire to asking someone else (your desire) which element you find. Subtle, but important.
Anyway, just wondering.
You're totally setting up a "earth wind water or Fire?" second line, so I'm going to do something else because I'm cool like that.
What element do I find my desire?
Does the court of Law call my name?
But there can't be room for another liar
Perhaps a boxing title I shall claim
But the pain too deep, and me a crier
Medice, Ah! To remove other's pain-
But I lack the knowlege this does require
Shall I lead a victorious campaign?
But while goal's may be high, my laziness higher
There is but one place where I can reign:
At Mickey D's, in front of a fryer.
New line:
It was the slow death of a million papercuts
