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Posted Apr 2, '11 at 9:00pm

Ernie15

Ernie15

13,419 posts

Knight

are you "the girl"? I'm pretty sure you might be.


I'm going to take a wild guess and say you're right. I highly doubt that either the chair or the box of chocolates would know "the girl" by name.
 

Posted Apr 3, '11 at 10:04am

TackyCrazyTNT

TackyCrazyTNT

1,955 posts

I'm going to take a wild guess and say you're right. I highly doubt that either the chair or the box of chocolates would know "the girl" by name.


You are quite correct, Ernie. I wanted to show my appreciation for household items, since I doubt they get poems very often.
 

Posted Apr 3, '11 at 11:13am

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,423 posts

Greatness Tacky. Greatness. The haikus for the house are awesome.
And the seasonal poem was funny. I can't really get into the nitty gritty, but if you do a longer poem, I will.

 

Posted Apr 3, '11 at 12:14pm

TackyCrazyTNT

TackyCrazyTNT

1,955 posts

Why, thank you, Moon.
Someone needs to give me some ideas on what kind of poem to do. Sonnet? Ode? Song lyrics? Some sets of couplets? Limericks?

Here's a limerick I wrote in elementary school:

Fox

There once was a very nice Fox.
He liked to pick up big rocks.
He threw them around,
They made a loud sound,
And he also lived in a box.

I know, I know. I was a brilliant poet back then. :P

Maybe I'll write some more Limericks later today. I'm in a limerick-y kind of mood.

 

Posted Apr 3, '11 at 12:18pm

gameinator

gameinator

10 posts

Those are brilliant Tacky, that fox one was really good.
I'm not that good at poetry, most of the stuff poetry related I did when I was around 8.

 

Posted Apr 3, '11 at 12:25pm

TackyCrazyTNT

TackyCrazyTNT

1,955 posts

Thanks, gameinator
And that's alright about the poetry thing. Some people are good at different things. I used to take dance lessons. D:

I absolutely hate learning dance.
You don't do anything but prance.
You twirl and you fall,
I don't learn anything at all,
You swish around as if in a trance.

Wow, that sucked. D:

 

Posted Apr 3, '11 at 12:31pm

gameinator

gameinator

10 posts

Better than most of the poems I've wrote, they're pretty funny as well.

 

Posted Apr 3, '11 at 1:00pm

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,423 posts

Ooooohohohohohohohohoh Do limericks.
Limericks are fun.
By the way, have you seen the Tanka Contest?

 

Posted Apr 3, '11 at 1:05pm

TackyCrazyTNT

TackyCrazyTNT

1,955 posts

I am checking it out as of this moment.

 

Posted Apr 3, '11 at 1:15pm

SupaLegit

SupaLegit

670 posts

Hey ya Tacky, in your Tanka, the last line is kinda funny

Choices that haunt us,
Choices that make us regret
The paths that we take.
It is better to simply
To never make decisions.


I think that

It is better to simply
Never make a decision.

Would sound a bit better :O
 
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